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The rising sun's fingers cast beams As the truck's tires sing as it comes along The crow now has arisen to caw The lookout caws like something is wrong There across the way the dove coos A crow up the road caws too In the oak tree an unusual sound Such peace proclaimed brand new Written June 25, 2024 ...Out On The Porch

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Valsa George

Date: 7/7/2024 9:01:00 PM

Watching the rising sun is always an energizing experience, a call to a fresh day's activities and a moment to thank God for granting one more day. With the rising sun, the world also rises up, the crows start cawing and the doves... cooing! Lovely poem, dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/8/2024 3:47:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I don't get out there as much anymore because of the heat as of now. It will get better though. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/30/2024 2:27:00 AM

Beautiful summer poem. Hope you will read my fantasy poem for the contest. The last three stanzas say it all.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/30/2024 7:17:00 AM

Thanks for the invitation to read your poem, Victor. I will drop by. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/27/2024 6:29:00 AM

Dear Sara, What an enjoyable read and I loved all your word pictures and sounds. The Sun, Crow, Dove, and the Oak Tree. I felt like I was in the perfect morning! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/27/2024 8:25:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel. It felt like a perfect morning and it was nice to get out there. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2024 1:00:00 PM

I expected something wrong from the line about the caw, but all turned out well and peaceful!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/26/2024 2:02:00 PM

Andrea, crows have a lookout, and they will call out a warning if there is a danger around so they can get the murder's attention to get up off the ground and up in a tree so they will be safe. So, when the crow cawed his warning it all turned out well. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2024 8:06:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "sun's fingers" write. Great morning picture. Have a great day writing away...............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/26/2024 8:18:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. I hope your day is divine. Sara K

Paul Bell

Date: 6/26/2024 8:06:00 AM

Has summer arrived out on the porch. Nearly time to take five jumpers off. Enjoy it while it's here.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/26/2024 8:18:00 AM

Oh!! Yes, Summer has arrived out on the porch, but the last couple of days is a little cooler early in the morn like at about 5:30 A.M. Sara K