Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Sun's Fingers

The rising sun's fingers cast beams
As the truck's tires sing as it comes along 
The crow now has arisen to caw
The lookout caws like something is wrong

There across the way the dove coos
A crow up the road caws too
In the oak tree an unusual sound
Such peace proclaimed brand new
     

Written June 25, 2024 ...Out On The Porch

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Valsa George July 7, 2024 at 9:01 PM Watching the rising sun is always an energizing experience, a call to a fresh day's activities and a moment to thank God for granting one more day. With the rising sun, the world also rises up, the crows start cawing and the doves... cooing! Lovely poem, dear Sara. Sara Kendrick July 8, 2024 at 3:47 AM Thank you, Valsa. I don't get out there as much anymore because of the heat as of now. It will get better though. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar June 30, 2024 at 2:27 AM Beautiful summer poem. Hope you will read my fantasy poem for the contest. The last three stanzas say it all. Sara Kendrick June 30, 2024 at 7:17 AM Thanks for the invitation to read your poem, Victor. I will drop by. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers June 27, 2024 at 6:29 AM Dear Sara, What an enjoyable read and I loved all your word pictures and sounds. The Sun, Crow, Dove, and the Oak Tree. I felt like I was in the perfect morning! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Sara Kendrick June 27, 2024 at 8:25 AM Thank you, Daniel. It felt like a perfect morning and it was nice to get out there. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2024 at 1:00 PM I expected something wrong from the line about the caw, but all turned out well and peaceful! Sara Kendrick June 26, 2024 at 2:02 PM Andrea, crows have a lookout, and they will call out a warning if there is a danger around so they can get the murder's attention to get up off the ground and up in a tree so they will be safe. So, when the crow cawed his warning it all turned out well. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Paul Bell June 26, 2024 at 8:06 AM Has summer arrived out on the porch. Nearly time to take five jumpers off. Enjoy it while it's here. Sara Kendrick June 26, 2024 at 8:18 AM Oh!! Yes, Summer has arrived out on the porch, but the last couple of days is a little cooler early in the morn like at about 5:30 A.M. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2024 at 8:06 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "sun's fingers" write. Great morning picture. Have a great day writing away............... Sara Kendrick June 26, 2024 at 8:18 AM Thank you, Paula. I hope your day is divine. Sara K