Sun's Betrayal
Whored the moon
'neath ravaged warm tides,
whence snowflakes caught fire
channeling sea's frothy surrender
in a vast edgy drink on
the brink of a vengeful rush,
whilst frigid oceans deviated mid murky
depths of aimless asylum harbors,
whorling faster to catch up with breaks of dawn
blistering under betrayal of the sun
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