Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

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Cotton Candy Sunrise...

Sunrises

West Central Georgia sunrise.
Pink cotton candy swirled with Indigo
passes away into ocean sand dotted by pale yellow sun.
Crows caw in the not so distant pines 
while call of Mocking Bird a steady chatter.
A rare crowing of rooster's call
maybe they decided not to rise at all..

Cool dry air surrounds my being;
its touch gentle and soothing like a new love..
Breathing made easy in blessed morn..

Just a few moments to absorb the dew 
to appreciate nature a blessing from above;
get in tune or center..

Time flies when in His presence ..
Duty calls..
Responsibility present..

Out on the porch Thursday, Septmember 15, 2011

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William Crocker September 21, 2011 at 3:30 AM Sara,You take my mind on a delisious ride.Ireally enjoy the line"soothing like a new love".I'm inspired. Thanks- Crossfox.

Jl Sadberry September 15, 2011 at 5:57 PM Ps. Smile, *^_^* “Yep! Some of Those Pommo's Can Be A Tad Bit Bitter Unto The Belly & The Buds But, Thankfully, We Can Exorcise This Through The Poo Poo Process *^_#* My Dear Precious & Lovely Sara &, Thank You, for Swinging By!” === My Love Unto Your Sweet Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Russell Sivey September 15, 2011 at 3:32 PM This is a great poem Sara! I love the line, "Just a few moment to absorb the dew", so much like the fall at this time! Your descriptions are wonderful. Beautiful poem!!

Jl Sadberry September 15, 2011 at 3:29 PM Smile, *^_^* “A Sea of Endlessly Beautiful Portraits Found Afore & Beyound Most Eyes Within Creations Wonders My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Sara! *^_^* Tis Always A Joy When Given the Opportunity Through Anothers Gifted & Blessed Eyes to Behold These Splendours Set In Place By `Our Beautiful Loving Fathers Hands!` *^_^* Love This Painting of A Painting Beautiful Sara!” === My Love Unto Your Lovely Treasures, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Prince Ekpemandu September 15, 2011 at 3:15 PM beautiful sara...thank you for commenting on my poem....

Carol Sunshine Brown September 15, 2011 at 1:18 PM Enjoyed reading today Sara. Thank you for stopping by my work. Love, Carol

John Smith September 15, 2011 at 12:33 PM Delightful portrayal. I live in a big city; I'm jealous.

Tony Lane September 15, 2011 at 11:51 AM I was in Atlanta last Thursday. We went to the aquarium. HAd a great time an the people were wonderful. Tony

Nette Onclaud September 15, 2011 at 11:44 AM what a dleighful word scene, sara... free verse becomes you!... i like lots!...:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 15, 2011 at 11:03 AM such a beautiful portrait of loveliness Sara with this view from your home State.. super imagery has caused me to stop and look outside my window today.. great sunshine and leaves beginning to fall carpeting the walkways.. my porch is empty now as we will be moving in a week or so... thankxx for lovely words..my friend..