Sunrise, Sunset

"sunrise, sunset"


crickets hiccuping

in the day
or is it night?

my eyes are closed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Situation Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:49 PM
I don't remember which.
Connelly Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Which Witch What?
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Love this but could be blindness, sickness, or just for fun. Be blessed! A fave!
Connelly Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 8:34 AM
The onsets of glaucoma. I've seen too much of the world lolol. Thanks for commenting Kim
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