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Sunrise Over the Sea

The sun hovers on the horizon and shimmers its rays across the sea. In this snatched moment life is balanced - as I breathe in its peace and tranquility. A life's quest for contentment encapsulated in this serene instant...... suspended ...... mentally photographed for posterity. Glimpsed - then gone - as the journey continues. Now, today, in this time frame, in this instant, I am happy: I have found it; the elusive rare butterfly; the slippery eel caught - held - then gasped for as it slips from my grasp. When I look back on this time, this place. I know it will be remembered fondly. I will handle it gently, removing it from the cerebral tissue paper which preserves it.... carefully unwrapping, piece by piece..... trying to recapture the clarity; the colours, the mood, but not quite as my memory becomes ravaged by the blurring of time. I recall when the sun hovered on the horizon and shimmered its rays across the sea. In that snatched moment, already gone, I found perfect contentment and peaceful symmetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/26/2008 8:37:00 AM
A moment we experience and wish could last forever - and a place or moment that we will always recall. Well done..
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Date: 8/24/2008 4:20:00 PM
hi I love the whole write, but I especially love the last paragraph, I love to watch the sun set it's so peaceful and serene, awesome, take care D-nyce
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Date: 8/24/2008 6:34:00 AM
Helen, nice to read you again. I was in Bermuda, many, many years ago, where I was overwhelmed by the beauty of a moment, where I captured everything and said out loud, I will never, ever forget this feeling, this picture, this moment in time. It is still there as though it were yesterday. Your beautiful poem brings it all back. Love, Shar
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