Sunrise Over the Sea

The sun hovers on the horizon and 
shimmers its rays across the sea.
In this snatched moment life is balanced -
as I breathe in its peace and tranquility.

A life's quest for contentment encapsulated
in this serene instant...... suspended ......
mentally photographed for posterity.
Glimpsed - then gone - as the journey continues.

Now, today, in this time frame, in this instant,
I am happy:  I have found it; the elusive
rare butterfly; the slippery eel caught - held -
then gasped for as it slips from my grasp.

When I look back on this time, this place.
I know it will be remembered fondly.
I will handle it gently, removing it from
the cerebral tissue paper which preserves it....

carefully unwrapping, piece by piece.....
trying to recapture the clarity; the colours,
the mood, but not quite as my memory 
becomes ravaged by the blurring  of time.

I recall when the sun hovered on the horizon
and shimmered its rays across the sea.
In that snatched moment, already gone,
I found perfect contentment and peaceful symmetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/26/2008 8:37:00 AM
A moment we experience and wish could last forever - and a place or moment that we will always recall. Well done..
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Date: 8/24/2008 4:20:00 PM
hi I love the whole write, but I especially love the last paragraph, I love to watch the sun set it's so peaceful and serene, awesome, take care D-nyce
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Date: 8/24/2008 6:34:00 AM
Helen, nice to read you again. I was in Bermuda, many, many years ago, where I was overwhelmed by the beauty of a moment, where I captured everything and said out loud, I will never, ever forget this feeling, this picture, this moment in time. It is still there as though it were yesterday. Your beautiful poem brings it all back. Love, Shar
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