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See related image detail. Beautiful Fall Sunrise

sunrise of candy

cotton candy sunrise
broken silence, crickets in love....
wonderful cool crispness

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sara Etgen-Baker

August 27, 2026 at 2:15 PM

love that title! perfect Haiku, Sara K.

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2026 at 5:03 PM

Why, thank you, Sara B. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Howard Kerr

August 25, 2026 at 11:20 PM

Such a wonderful cool poem, Sara. Elements of romance, haunting colour. A lovely picture as inspiration.🔥🔥 Howard

Sara Kendrick

August 26, 2026 at 6:02 AM

Howard, you have made my day brighter with the reading of your uplifting review. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Pascal Borg

August 25, 2026 at 8:57 PM

I can almost hear the crickets, Sara. Imaginative Haiku.

Sara Kendrick

August 26, 2026 at 5:49 AM

Why, thank you, Pascal. I am hearing them if I open the door at dusk until after dawn. Thanks for the visit. Sara K. 👍⭐

Gershon Wolf

August 25, 2026 at 7:39 PM

'Crickets in love' -- never thought those sounds meant that. Thanks for the education, Sara! :) gw

Sara Kendrick

August 26, 2026 at 5:25 AM

Yes, Gershon, it is males attracting a mate and also territorial notice to other males. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K. 👍⭐

Brandy Nicole

August 25, 2026 at 5:49 PM

' cotton candy sunrise. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. I love the way you paint these breathtaking images with your words. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you, Sara. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Kendrick

August 26, 2026 at 5:22 AM

Brandy, I am delighted that my work made your heart smile. I appreciate the visit, kind review and blessings. I hope this day brings many great things your way. Sara K. 👍⭐.

Paula Goldsmith

August 25, 2026 at 10:04 AM

This haiku is a wonderful read/write. I really enjoyed this short one. Pretty picture. Have a lovely day writing away.............

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2026 at 2:11 PM

Why, thank you, Paula. Not very much writing going on but maybe it will happen tomorrow.. 👍⭐..Sara K.

Dorothy Gibbons

August 25, 2026 at 9:56 AM

Sara this is so beautiful you've painted a beautiful sunrise with words ✍️ " cotton candy 🌸0sunrise " idelic hugzzz friend ❤️‍🩹

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2026 at 2:09 PM

Why, thank you, Dorthy. I enjoyed writing that one as the scene unfolded while walking the dog. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Sotto Poet

August 25, 2026 at 9:44 AM

This haiku beautifully captures the essence of a new day with vivid imagery. The idea of a cotton candy sunrise is delightful and evokes a sense of wonder and calm.

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2026 at 2:02 PM

👍⭐..Why, thank you, Lasaad. Your comments are golden. Sara K.

Valsa George

August 25, 2026 at 9:28 AM

Lovely haiku... crisp and colorful !

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2026 at 2:01 PM

Your comments are so thoughtful, Valsa. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Alison A Smith

August 25, 2026 at 6:01 AM

A lovely, sensory haiku sequence: the “cotton candy sunrise” brings soft colour and sweetness, while the cricket chorus fills the broken silence with tenderness. The closing “wonderful cool crispness” leaves a refreshing, dawn-lit feeling.

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2026 at 9:01 AM

I am delighted that you could have that dawn lite feeling when reading it, Alison. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K. 👏✍️

Hiya Sharma

August 25, 2026 at 5:52 AM

Awwwn cotton candy sunrise! And cool crispness! 🩷💞💜 i absolutely ADORE the imagery here sweet Sara 🧡🍧💫 it's delicious and so whimsically throughout, the silence broken with the crickets song! Ahhh feels like a cool breeze for my heart.. how soothing and refreshing.. my soul is swooning over this haiku! Sending you starlight and moonbeams always 💫💫🌙🌙

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2026 at 8:57 AM

Thank you, Sharma, for the starlight and moonbeams which I don't get to see very much. It is so much nicer out there this morning with the air being dryer. I thank God for the coolness in the air. A reprieve from the humidity of summer. ⭐👍. Sara K.