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Sunrise: Multi Coloured Bands

multi coloured bands 
stretch across the morning sky- -
jupiter hidden

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Iolanda Scripca

November 18, 2011 at 5:21 PM

Here we are, all, under the same rising sun...Congratulations on your win!!! Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 18, 2011 at 3:42 PM

Congrats Jack on a grand win luv for this excellent Haiku my friend.. planet heaven..

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 18, 2011 at 10:56 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

November 18, 2011 at 8:46 AM

Like this one Jack. Well written. Congrats

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 18, 2011 at 2:59 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest,Jack

Poet Destroyer A

November 18, 2011 at 2:25 AM

JACK, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 16, 2011 at 7:47 AM

any piece with planets intrigues me Jack.. a wonderful photogenic scene in words luv.. good luck in contest .. I am a mercury gal..and Venus of course..haha..

Elizabeth Wesley

November 14, 2011 at 8:55 PM

I've been reading your ku's Jack and your imagery is amazing with so few words. I really enjoy them. Luv, Lizzy

Carolyn Devonshire

November 14, 2011 at 12:57 PM

On the sea at night, you can see Venus and Mars quite clearly. Don't know if I've seen Jupiter, but through your poem I felt the sense of day "breaking" and taking with it all the sites of the evening. Beautiful description, Jack, and I'm sending winning wishes your way for PD's contest! Love, carolyn

Kash Poet

November 13, 2011 at 7:40 AM

Beautiful haiku here jack...best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A

November 12, 2011 at 11:31 PM

YOU WORK FAST.. I WAS JUST STOPPING BY TO SEE IF YOU HAD ONE FOR ME... THANK YOU,..HAVE YOURSELF A GOOD NIGHT...P.D.

Barbara Gorelick

November 12, 2011 at 12:14 AM

Just beautiful Jack...creative work. BG

Nancy Jones

November 11, 2011 at 7:42 PM

ooohh, nice one jack! good luck ~N

Russell Sivey

November 11, 2011 at 4:36 PM

Beautiful just glorious! I enjoyed this write, very much! By just reading words, simple words, I got a vision deep in my mind, very awesome colors!! You have written a very descriptive sight, this image will always stay with me!! Lovely work!!

Sara Kendrick

November 11, 2011 at 3:47 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Yes, that Jupiter is very destintive some morns in the early morning sky..Sad that the clouds had it hidden...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

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