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Sunrise: Multi Coloured Bands

multi coloured bands stretch across the morning sky- - jupiter hidden

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/18/2011 5:21:00 PM

Here we are, all, under the same rising sun...Congratulations on your win!!! Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2011 3:42:00 PM

Congrats Jack on a grand win luv for this excellent Haiku my friend.. planet heaven..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:46:00 AM

Like this one Jack. Well written. Congrats

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2011 2:59:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest,Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:25:00 AM

JACK, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 7:47:00 AM

any piece with planets intrigues me Jack.. a wonderful photogenic scene in words luv.. good luck in contest .. I am a mercury gal..and Venus of course..haha..

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/14/2011 8:55:00 PM

I've been reading your ku's Jack and your imagery is amazing with so few words. I really enjoy them. Luv, Lizzy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/14/2011 12:57:00 PM

On the sea at night, you can see Venus and Mars quite clearly. Don't know if I've seen Jupiter, but through your poem I felt the sense of day "breaking" and taking with it all the sites of the evening. Beautiful description, Jack, and I'm sending winning wishes your way for PD's contest! Love, carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2011 7:40:00 AM

Beautiful haiku here jack...best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 11:31:00 PM

YOU WORK FAST.. I WAS JUST STOPPING BY TO SEE IF YOU HAD ONE FOR ME... THANK YOU,..HAVE YOURSELF A GOOD NIGHT...P.D.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/12/2011 12:14:00 AM

Just beautiful Jack...creative work. BG

Nancy Jones

Date: 11/11/2011 7:42:00 PM

ooohh, nice one jack! good luck ~N

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/11/2011 4:36:00 PM

Beautiful just glorious! I enjoyed this write, very much! By just reading words, simple words, I got a vision deep in my mind, very awesome colors!! You have written a very descriptive sight, this image will always stay with me!! Lovely work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2011 3:47:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Yes, that Jupiter is very destintive some morns in the early morning sky..Sad that the clouds had it hidden...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara