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Sunrise Haiku On King Sun

king sun is peeking over tropical waters. . . . palms wave a welcome from the horizon the monarch ascends into a sea of dark clouds in golden fullness the sun takes its rightful place. . . . dismissing all clouds in sky’s blue kingdom above tropical waters. . . . king sun is peaking

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:09:00 PM

awesome theme andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2012 6:16:00 PM

wow/.. my comment is very long....let me see,, if i can post a huge comment on your latest poem.. i think i read it this morning..pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2012 6:15:00 PM

HA ha, Andrea,, it seems as if every poem I click of yours has a comment of mine..Maybe you can point out a poem, of yours i did not read.. Maybe, you want me to sit down and relax, and comment a poem of yours with ,, a second thought... please ! Give me a title,, I want to read a poem and give it a hoot of a comment,,, I want to knock your socks off,, with the proper observation on your poem. I will pull a Ravindra, I sit and read the same poem, till i feel his poem speaking to me. I have nothing but, great love and respect for the poet,, Besides, he gives me the maximum characters a comment allows, on any poem he chooses to read of mine.. Let, me sit here and read any poem, you want me to comment on with a triple observation. Yes, if you must know I'm bored, and I read many not so thrilling poems this morning.. well I did enjoy most... anyways..I'll be here till I pass out... like a turkey ....pd

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/18/2011 5:23:00 PM

Here we are, all, under the same rising sun...Congratulations on your win, dear Andie!!! Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2011 3:40:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on a wonderful win for these exciting Haikus ..perfect imagery luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:45:00 AM

A wonderful poem Andrea. Congratulations on your win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/18/2011 8:23:00 AM

what a great theme...with royalty in the sunrise!! Great winning haikus, Andrea!! Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2011 2:59:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest,Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:25:00 AM

ANDREA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

David Williams

Date: 11/18/2011 2:19:00 AM

Andrea many congrats on your brilliant win..David

Jack Horne

Date: 11/16/2011 2:38:00 PM

Very clever haiku - awesome imagery, Andrea. Hope you are feeling much better now

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/15/2011 8:56:00 PM

Beautiful! Good luck! :) Always, Laura

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/15/2011 8:31:00 PM

Nice series of Haiku for PD's contest. Getting late but just wanted to read a few of yours before bed. love phyl

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/14/2011 6:01:00 PM

Allow me to quote James Kirup... 'Haiku should just be/small stones dropping down a well/with a small splash' unquote... I think your few small splashes together make a great wave of beauty at sunrise...luv Margaret

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/14/2011 12:59:00 PM

just glowing, flowing, andie... gosh, i have not tackled this one yet.. winner, whooot! :) hugggs!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/14/2011 11:24:00 AM

pretty imagery. i like "palm waves a welcome" all goes well w/the pictures :) good luck in the contest!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/13/2011 4:42:00 PM

beautiful Andrea, love #3 best but all are awesome, good luck, Harry

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/13/2011 4:00:00 PM

Andrea~the sky as the King Sun's kingdom....great quadruple haiku story...u pulled that off so well. I love how the sun takes its rightful place excusing the clouds from their posts. Subtle personifying...suave. Love, Gwendolen

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/13/2011 3:49:00 PM

Forth stanza reminds me of the old Hamm's beer comercial's. The land of sky blue waters. How's that for bringing your fine work down to base humanity. :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/13/2011 11:32:00 AM

dropping by to say again how much I enjoyed reading this one :D very cool way to present good 'ol Mr. (or should I say King) sun here :) hugs to you! ok I am outta here! :D

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 11/13/2011 10:52:00 AM

What a wonderful list of Haikus Andrea, you captured the pictures perfectly. Best to you in the contest~ Caryl

James Fraser

Date: 11/13/2011 10:26:00 AM

Stunning Haiku Andrea, capturing the most beautiful of images. Good luck in pd's contest :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/13/2011 9:43:00 AM

Andrea, I absolutely enjoyed this, we are finally having a wee bit of sunshine after a rainy day, sun is still shining and it is almost 7pm over here.. hope your Sunday is a great one :) love and all the best for the contest!!

David Williams

Date: 11/13/2011 8:50:00 AM

Andrea, just love them....good luck..David