Sunrise Haiku On King Sun

king sun is peeking over tropical waters. . . . palms wave a welcome from the horizon the monarch ascends into a sea of dark clouds in golden fullness the sun takes its rightful place. . . . dismissing all clouds in sky’s blue kingdom above tropical waters. . . . king sun is peaking
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May 16, 2015 at 12:09 PM
awesome theme andrea
A   Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 6:16 PM
wow/.. my comment is very long....let me see,, if i can post a huge comment on your latest poem.. i think i read it this morning..pd
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May 29, 2012 at 6:15 PM
HA ha, Andrea,, it seems as if every poem I click of yours has a comment of mine..Maybe you can point out a poem, of yours i did not read.. Maybe, you want me to sit down and relax, and comment a poem of yours with ,, a second thought... please ! Give me a title,, I want to read a poem and give it a hoot of a comment,,, I want to knock your socks off,, with the proper observation on your poem. I will pull a Ravindra, I sit and read the same poem, till i feel his poem speaking to me. I have nothing but, great love and respect for the poet,, Besides, he gives me the maximum characters a comment allows, on any poem he chooses to read of mine.. Let, me sit here and read any poem, you want me to comment on with a triple observation. Yes, if you must know I'm bored, and I read many not so thrilling poems this morning.. well I did enjoy most... anyways..I'll be here till I pass out... like a turkey ....pd
Scripca Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 5:23 PM
Here we are, all, under the same rising sun...Congratulations on your win, dear Andie!!! Love, iolanda
Sweetheart Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Congrats Andrea on a wonderful win for these exciting Haikus ..perfect imagery luv..
Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 8:45 AM
A wonderful poem Andrea. Congratulations on your win.
Richards Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 8:23 AM
what a great theme...with royalty in the sunrise!! Great winning haikus, Andrea!! Congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 2:59 AM
Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest,Andrea
A   Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 2:25 AM
ANDREA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.
Williams Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 2:19 AM
Andrea many congrats on your brilliant win..David
Horne Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Very clever haiku - awesome imagery, Andrea. Hope you are feeling much better now
Breidenthal Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 8:56 PM
Beautiful! Good luck! :) Always, Laura
Babcock Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Nice series of Haiku for PD's contest. Getting late but just wanted to read a few of yours before bed. love phyl
Foster Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Allow me to quote James Kirup... 'Haiku should just be/small stones dropping down a well/with a small splash' unquote... I think your few small splashes together make a great wave of beauty at sunrise...luv Margaret
Onclaud Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 12:59 PM
just glowing, flowing, andie... gosh, i have not tackled this one yet.. winner, whooot! :) hugggs!
Susan Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 11:24 AM
pretty imagery. i like "palm waves a welcome" all goes well w/the pictures :) good luck in the contest!
Horsman Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 4:42 PM
beautiful Andrea, love #3 best but all are awesome, good luck, Harry
Song Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 4:00 PM
Andrea~the sky as the King Sun's kingdom....great quadruple haiku story...u pulled that off so well. I love how the sun takes its rightful place excusing the clouds from their posts. Subtle personifying...suave. Love, Gwendolen
Johnson Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Forth stanza reminds me of the old Hamm's beer comercial's. The land of sky blue waters. How's that for bringing your fine work down to base humanity. :)
K. Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 11:32 AM
dropping by to say again how much I enjoyed reading this one :D very cool way to present good 'ol Mr. (or should I say King) sun here :) hugs to you! ok I am outta here! :D
Muzzey Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 10:52 AM
What a wonderful list of Haikus Andrea, you captured the pictures perfectly. Best to you in the contest~ Caryl
Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Stunning Haiku Andrea, capturing the most beautiful of images. Good luck in pd's contest :)
Neels Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 9:43 AM
Andrea, I absolutely enjoyed this, we are finally having a wee bit of sunshine after a rainy day, sun is still shining and it is almost 7pm over here.. hope your Sunday is a great one :) love and all the best for the contest!!
Williams Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 8:50 AM
Andrea, just love them....good luck..David
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