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02/15/18

Sunrise and Sunset 

Contest by Silent One.

Re edited on 04/10/24

No.1300 

Contest by Brian Strand

Sunrise and Sunset

          SUNRISE and SUNSET

                                                                                                                                  
                 Soft Sun below horizon about to awake 
                  scattering scarlet crimson glow.
                    Morning breeze starts to flow
               Flora and Fauna look fresh at dawn break.  
               Sun traverses daily path from East to West
               Morn to noon, then afternoon, next to set.

                
                  Suns sinks, bids bye to evening sky.
                   Twilight tends to fade, feeling shy.
                   Being calm, birds stop chirping, wish rest.
                      All are keen to return to nest.
                      Sadness prevails, crows cease to cry.
                   Forgotten past knocks heart to sigh.
                        Sun sets on promise:
                        Next morning to rise.
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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Back with my congrats, Anisha.
Ashley Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Your poem is beautifully expressed in lovely emotions and wonderful imagery Anisha. I especially love your last two lines. Congratulations on your fine win. ~Susan
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Lovely poem Anisha.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:56 AM
- A piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Nicely penned Anisha..
Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Charming poem, Anisha. Lovely.
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