Sunrise

Sunrise songbirds sing morning treetops purple pink fusion nature’s sun rises Sunshine Williams

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Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 2:16:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Can't wait for the next sunrise. I live in the city, So I don't ever see imagery like this one here. So for now I have to use your haiku for the awesomeness of a real Sunrise. Love SKAT

Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/20/2015 3:44:00 AM

I am honored Skat!...:), jill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2015 5:30:00 PM

such creative lines for the songbird and the treetops!!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/19/2015 11:24:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, it's exactly what happened..:), xx jill

Eric Boddie

Date: 11/19/2015 5:10:00 PM

eyes can not withstand....what nature exerts so bright....another day seen....Beautiful haiku jill....;)

Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/19/2015 11:22:00 PM

Thanks for taking your time on my poem :), my fellow poet, favorite boddie...peace

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/19/2015 12:44:00 PM

Beautiful natural atmospheric poem my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/19/2015 4:24:00 PM

So nice to be loved bl, ox right back at you...:), jill

Daver Austin

Date: 11/19/2015 11:26:00 AM

You've colored the whole with your middle line. Nice job. Love, daver

Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/19/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thank you daver, that is exactly what I woke to this morning...:), jill