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Sunrise

the sun awakens bringing darkly lit grey clouds the sky’s red parade add yellow to mix red starts to depart the scene and the clouds whiten now the sky finds blue the clouds reach their full whiteness the day has begun Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/9/2012 11:08:00 AM
Very expressive of morning...I enjoy writing about those sunrises each one is different and has its own uniqueness to be penned..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 1/9/2012 1:15:00 AM
when color change does rearrange, the kaledioscopic sky...
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Date: 1/9/2012 12:15:00 AM
such splendid imagery you spoil us with, russell.. breathtaking!.. winning hugggs! :)
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:49:00 PM
PERFECTION IN VISUAL IMAGERY WITH EVERY SET RUSSELL..GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST WITH BRILLIANT BOUQUET OF SUNRISE...
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:46:00 PM
I really love your interpretation of the sky! My wife is a photographer who is heavy into the scenes above.
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Date: 1/8/2012 5:25:00 AM
What a lovely start to the day.. sweet write Russell xx
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Date: 1/7/2012 11:01:00 PM
oh really lovely Russell wakening of day, Brenda : )
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Date: 1/7/2012 10:52:00 PM
Oh, this is very nice..it is a series of changes...well done. BG
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