Sunrise

Natures own delight.
A beautiful end to night.
Simply breath taking.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Congrats Erica on a wonderful win for this creative Haiku luv..
Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Erica. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 9:11 AM
Erica congrats on your great win..David
Quigley Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Well written Erica. Congratulations
Mehta Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 3:05 AM
Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, Erica
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November 18, 2011 at 2:34 AM
ERICA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.
Wilson Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 2:36 PM
I like the simplicit of this haiku. The use of rhyme is engaging. I wonder, though, if the commas help? Particulalry L2 feels to me like it doesn't really need one. It's a small point and I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes, Jim
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