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Sunrise

Natures own delight. A beautiful end to night. Simply breath taking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/18/2011 9:28:00 PM
Congrats Erica on a wonderful win for this creative Haiku luv..
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Date: 11/18/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Erica. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2011 9:11:00 AM
Erica congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:18:00 AM
Well written Erica. Congratulations
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Date: 11/18/2011 3:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, Erica
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Date: 11/18/2011 2:34:00 AM
ERICA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 11/14/2011 2:36:00 PM
I like the simplicit of this haiku. The use of rhyme is engaging. I wonder, though, if the commas help? Particulalry L2 feels to me like it doesn't really need one. It's a small point and I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes, Jim
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