Sunrise

Summit's reflection
Illuminate majesty
Echoes still waters

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Elaine George

Date: 5/25/2010 9:58:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Kimberly. Thank you or sharing. Lainie

Rachel W

Date: 5/16/2010 7:49:00 PM

It draws me in..right in from of a sunset. Beautiful, Kimberly.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 8:33:00 PM

well done in this one, nice haiku,..p.d.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/18/2010 4:33:00 AM

Congratulations Kimberly, on your placement in Raul’s “Sunrise” haiku contest with this glorious and peaceful poem. I can see why you are in the winners circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Date: 2/17/2010 3:34:00 PM

Just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/15/2010 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning haiku in the Sunrise contest.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/14/2010 6:41:00 PM

Awesome! Kimberly! A beautiful sunrise. Another well written Haiku. Thanks for sharing and again thank you for reading and commenting on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 12:41:00 PM

congrats on the win!! love it!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/14/2010 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations, Kimberly! Another well written Haiku of yours. And thank you for your comments...Rgds. Gert

Date: 2/13/2010 8:24:00 AM

You have me smiling with this view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/13/2010 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Kimberly. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 5:58:00 AM

Congrats Kimberly on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a beautiful Haiku to describe the photo.. enjoy your spotlight moment of victory.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/13/2010 5:03:00 AM

Kimberly, I can tell you are a haiku fan by the way this was written....with great creativity! Congratulations on being in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2010 12:57:00 AM

But now I REGRET that my wish came true!!! (speaking of my dandelion poem). I like this haiku. I think you captured well the essence of that photo! LUv, Andrea ps sounds like you are in the winner circle? congrats!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/12/2010 10:29:00 PM

Kimberly, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/12/2010 8:06:00 PM

Lovely haiku, I like the use of reflection and echoes. good work.. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem...Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2010 7:28:00 PM

A great Haiku entry for Raul's contest Sunrise.. good luck if its your entry Kimberly... and thankxxx for your very special and precious comments on my poetry tonight.. very appreciative ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/12/2010 2:20:00 PM

Quite a striking image you paint in this haiku, Kimberly. Indeed, you have the gift to "Illuminate majesty" in a way that fills the reader with joy. Love, Carolyn

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/12/2010 1:41:00 PM

We all see , in different words , Kimberly . Great call and best of luck in the contest ....

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/12/2010 1:40:00 PM

Ilike the echo idea, very nice.