Sunrise

Summit's reflection
Illuminate majesty
Echoes still waters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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George   Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Beautiful haiku, Kimberly. Thank you or sharing. Lainie
W Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 7:49 PM
It draws me in..right in from of a sunset. Beautiful, Kimberly.
A   Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 8:33 PM
well done in this one, nice haiku,..p.d.
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February 18, 2010 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations Kimberly, on your placement in Raul’s “Sunrise” haiku contest with this glorious and peaceful poem. I can see why you are in the winners circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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February 17, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
Augustus Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Congratulations on your winning haiku in the Sunrise contest.
Delacroix Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 6:41 PM
Awesome! Kimberly! A beautiful sunrise. Another well written Haiku. Thanks for sharing and again thank you for reading and commenting on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 12:41 PM
congrats on the win!! love it!
Knop Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations, Kimberly! Another well written Haiku of yours. And thank you for your comments...Rgds. Gert
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February 13, 2010 at 8:24 AM
You have me smiling with this view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Brown Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Kimberly. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congrats Kimberly on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a beautiful Haiku to describe the photo.. enjoy your spotlight moment of victory.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:03 AM
Kimberly, I can tell you are a haiku fan by the way this was written....with great creativity! Congratulations on being in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 12:57 AM
But now I REGRET that my wish came true!!! (speaking of my dandelion poem). I like this haiku. I think you captured well the essence of that photo! LUv, Andrea ps sounds like you are in the winner circle? congrats!!
Moreno Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 10:29 PM
Kimberly, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
Foster Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Lovely haiku, I like the use of reflection and echoes. good work.. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem...Margaret
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 7:28 PM
A great Haiku entry for Raul's contest Sunrise.. good luck if its your entry Kimberly... and thankxxx for your very special and precious comments on my poetry tonight.. very appreciative ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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February 12, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Quite a striking image you paint in this haiku, Kimberly. Indeed, you have the gift to "Illuminate majesty" in a way that fills the reader with joy. Love, Carolyn
Kelly Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 1:41 PM
We all see , in different words , Kimberly . Great call and best of luck in the contest ....
Culverhouse Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Ilike the echo idea, very nice.
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 12:06 PM
Great Haiku that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Bagnall Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Smart! interesting words - good luck
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