Sunrise

Golden threads of light
Stitch the morning together,
Through each pine needle.

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Edward Orozco

November 30, 2009 at 8:26 PM

Good write master. - ed

Sara Kendrick

November 30, 2009 at 10:08 AM

I can see that embroidery work very plainly. Keep the Haiku pen flowing. Been missing catching you on line. Sara

November 29, 2009 at 4:36 PM

Wonderful use of imagery to weave this poem. You are truly a talented writer. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us. Karen

James Faulkner

November 28, 2009 at 2:31 PM

one of the best poets and painters at the soup. love this poem. love and peace: james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 26, 2009 at 5:40 PM

What a beautiful scene, Raul, u have painted with your words.. truly lovely and descriptive haiku.. I so enjoy reading your poetry... and your contest is electric... its sending sparks throughout the Soupers to get their creative juices flowing... thankxxx and hope u had a wonderful Turkey Day ... luv ... blessings... more luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"