Sunrise

Golden threads of light Stitch the morning together, Through each pine needle.

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Edward Orozco

Date: 11/30/2009 8:26:00 PM

Good write master. - ed

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2009 10:08:00 AM

I can see that embroidery work very plainly. Keep the Haiku pen flowing. Been missing catching you on line. Sara

Date: 11/29/2009 4:36:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery to weave this poem. You are truly a talented writer. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us. Karen

James Faulkner

Date: 11/28/2009 2:31:00 PM

one of the best poets and painters at the soup. love this poem. love and peace: james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2009 5:40:00 PM

What a beautiful scene, Raul, u have painted with your words.. truly lovely and descriptive haiku.. I so enjoy reading your poetry... and your contest is electric... its sending sparks throughout the Soupers to get their creative juices flowing... thankxxx and hope u had a wonderful Turkey Day ... luv ... blessings... more luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/26/2009 4:50:00 PM

That is just plain outstanding, Raul ! wonderful. I love it. Cool !

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/26/2009 12:43:00 PM

You have outdone yourself. this is lovely. BG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/26/2009 12:20:00 PM

WONDERFUL HAIKU..full of light and warmth--Charma