Sunrise

The sun rises slowly here,
fingers of sunlight
lifting his body over the wall
of marshland to check
on his children.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rolland Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 2:43 PM
delicious imagery, it "works" for me, thanks poet
Bryan Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 9:34 PM
Really wonderful to hear that. Thank you for reading it, and taking the time to leave comment!
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