Sunrise

Morning ray of light
Whispers to the horizon,
Time for all to wake.

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/11/2009 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)

Brandee Augustus

Date: 3/11/2009 10:25:00 AM

I'm really getting used to the beauty of haikus being conected to this site. Brilliant haiku!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/11/2009 8:20:00 AM

Congrats Raul on your haiku "Sunrise" being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/11/2009 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/9/2009 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured it is well deserved. This is such a vivid piece and the flow is wonderful. It is so light and peaceful. I love the line "whispers on the horizon" as it describes so well the dawn. Smiles from Lolita

Sue Mason

Date: 3/9/2009 3:55:00 PM

Excellent, Raul! Captures the title perfectly! I love this form which can be so stark yet filled with imagery. Great choice to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/9/2009 1:44:00 PM

Congratulatons on this beautiful Haiku being featured this wee, Raul! Love, Robin

Catherine Reinke

Date: 3/9/2009 1:22:00 PM

congrats...I learned I was featured today and many poets wrote me to congraululate me...I thought it was so sweet..sfo I am doing it too. Liked your poem, really sweet, Paul...

Date: 3/9/2009 12:40:00 PM

You've got me smiling with this one. Thank you for the day brightener. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Blessings to you. Karen