Sunrise

Morning ray of light
Whispers to the horizon,
Time for all to wake.

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Laura Mckenzie

March 11, 2009 at 11:25 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)

Brandee Augustus

March 11, 2009 at 10:25 AM

I'm really getting used to the beauty of haikus being conected to this site. Brilliant haiku!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

March 11, 2009 at 8:20 AM

Congrats Raul on your haiku "Sunrise" being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 11, 2009 at 8:12 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Lena Townsend

March 9, 2009 at 4:19 PM

Congratulations on being featured it is well deserved. This is such a vivid piece and the flow is wonderful. It is so light and peaceful. I love the line "whispers on the horizon" as it describes so well the dawn. Smiles from Lolita

Sue Mason

March 9, 2009 at 3:55 PM

Excellent, Raul! Captures the title perfectly! I love this form which can be so stark yet filled with imagery. Great choice to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations!

Robin L. Gass

March 9, 2009 at 1:44 PM

Congratulatons on this beautiful Haiku being featured this wee, Raul! Love, Robin

Catherine Reinke

March 9, 2009 at 1:22 PM

congrats...I learned I was featured today and many poets wrote me to congraululate me...I thought it was so sweet..sfo I am doing it too. Liked your poem, really sweet, Paul...

March 9, 2009 at 12:40 PM

You've got me smiling with this one. Thank you for the day brightener. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Blessings to you. Karen