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Sunrise, slowly it sneaks, first, it will take a peek and if the coastline is all clear, then just a tad more near the horizon its yellow will show, it will glow, a strong push from the range, then it will be sunrise. 2019 September 27 howmanysyllables 2R,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2R

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Date: 11/25/2019 10:11:00 AM
another nice verse, William, nature has always fascinated me in the artist point of view
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Hilo Poet
Date: 11/25/2019 11:58:00 AM
Many thanks for your astute share Eve ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/28/2019 2:33:00 PM
Hello William Kekaula, that sun rise looks beautiful. Have a nice day my friend. Aloha! Darlene
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Date: 9/28/2019 2:36:00 PM
My sweet thanks Darlene, ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/28/2019 1:47:00 AM
"first it takes a peek" - love the way you personified it!
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Date: 9/28/2019 5:21:00 AM
I sure did that, huh?

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