William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rictameter

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Sunrise

Sunrise,
slowly it sneaks,
first, it will take a peek
and if the coastline is all clear,
then just a tad more near the horizon
its yellow will show, it will glow,
a strong push from the range,
then it will be
sunrise.


2019 September 27
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2R,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2R

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Eve Roper November 25, 2019 at 10:11 AM another nice verse, William, nature has always fascinated me in the artist point of view William Kelii Kekaula November 25, 2019 at 11:58 AM Many thanks for your astute share Eve ~ Aloha always William

Darlene De Beaulieu September 28, 2019 at 2:33 PM Hello William Kekaula, that sun rise looks beautiful. Have a nice day my friend. Aloha! Darlene William Kelii Kekaula September 28, 2019 at 2:36 PM My sweet thanks Darlene, ~ Aloha always William

Caren Krutsinger September 28, 2019 at 1:47 AM "first it takes a peek" - love the way you personified it! William Kelii Kekaula September 28, 2019 at 5:21 AM I sure did that, huh?