Sunrise

Sunrise
is the very beginning of daily chapters
as people use their feet to write
their journeys and destinies
and finish writing their chapter
as they go to bed at midnight
during a full moon
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Dutta Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Nice composition. Trying your contest. Love.
Talwar Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 6:25 PM
It's a beautiful piece! It's so picturesque. Please read my work too.
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Fascinating poem vermilion, I especially love as people use their feet to write their journeys and destinies ... What a wonderful description! :-) not sure if I can come up with a poem for the contest but will try if my muse behaves:-) loved the video you are so talented:-) hugs Jan xx
Scythe Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 12:19 PM
This will be the last poem I will post for a while. Don't worry, I never intend to leave this site.
Rowe Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 6:50 PM
An interesting perspective. It's about something beyond just sunrise... away least more than the actual sun rising.
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