Sunny Days

Spiraling, spinning out of control.
Can't you tell that it's taking a toll. 
Stabbing, burning, constant pain.
Sub-par eyes glossing over again.
Today's the day to finally release;
To let go, to slip into glorious peace.
Eyes hazing, head rolling, going to sleep.
Fog thickens, head spinning; won't somebody weep.
Look up as she dies, bright skies turning gray.
No one would save her, goodbye sunny days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George   Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 5:54 PM
Great writing, Kayla. Many congrats on your great win. Elaine
Gentry Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 11:30 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sad poem, dark. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 10:00 PM
A poignant poem. Congrats on your top win, Kayla.
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