Frances Byrne Poet Rhyme

Sunny Day

Sun beams down
On our little town
No longer grey
Dullness shone away

Soothing warmth
On our skin
The heat penetrates
We are warmed within

Birds singing
People laughing
Children playing
Beautiful life in the making

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John Stasukevich August 22, 2023 at 5:55 AM What a beautiful piece, Frances! I could feel the warmth of the sun as I read it. The cadence is spot on and the brevity refreshing. Nice work. Frances Byrne August 22, 2023 at 7:53 AM Hi John, Thanks so much, they are lovely comments. Frances

Richard Lamoureux April 4, 2021 at 10:13 AM As I read this I am sitting in the sun so I have the 3D experience as I read your lovely piece. Frances Byrne April 12, 2021 at 12:47 PM Hi Richard, Thanks for your comments, enjoy your good weather. Frances

Jan Allison July 27, 2020 at 4:45 PM what a beautiful uplifting poem Frances i am smiling at your imagery:-) hugs jan xx Frances Byrne July 27, 2020 at 4:49 PM Hi Jan, Thanks for your lovely comment, you have made me smile.