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Sunny Day

Sun beams down On our little town No longer grey Dullness shone away Soothing warmth On our skin The heat penetrates We are warmed within Birds singing People laughing Children playing Beautiful life in the making

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John Stasukevich

Date: 8/22/2023 5:55:00 AM

What a beautiful piece, Frances! I could feel the warmth of the sun as I read it. The cadence is spot on and the brevity refreshing. Nice work.

Frances Byrne
Date: 8/22/2023 7:53:00 AM

Hi John, Thanks so much, they are lovely comments. Frances

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2021 10:13:00 AM

As I read this I am sitting in the sun so I have the 3D experience as I read your lovely piece.

Frances Byrne
Date: 4/12/2021 12:47:00 PM

Hi Richard, Thanks for your comments, enjoy your good weather. Frances

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2020 4:45:00 PM

what a beautiful uplifting poem Frances i am smiling at your imagery:-) hugs jan xx

Frances Byrne
Date: 7/27/2020 4:49:00 PM

Hi Jan, Thanks for your lovely comment, you have made me smile.