Noel Flater Poet Free verse

Sunning In Spring

“Sunning in Spring”

Sunning in Spring, but remembering now,
that time, the time,
Hips deep, stuck in snow, 
so down, so cold, so low,

Sunning in Spring, but remembering now, 
that time, the time,
Face wintered, so bitter, so cold
Feeling at best so-so
So-so, not so long ago…

TO BE CONTINUED

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This is my unfinished poem, hopefully it becomes a symphony. Today, I’ll have faith, something good is coming, in the next weeks, in the not sure what. FEEDBACK WELCOME.

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Shimmer Whiteleather April 27, 2019 at 5:55 PM Feeling not so so but stunning to be sunning in spring!! great poem Noel!! Noel Flater April 27, 2019 at 7:21 PM Well said, I'm sure Shimmer likes summer too.

Caren Krutsinger April 27, 2019 at 5:47 AM It is amazing how swiftly we begin enjoying the sun, drowning out all memory of the snow that covered and immobilized us seconds before. You have conveyed this, Noel. Noel Flater April 27, 2019 at 5:52 AM Thanks Caren, I'm hoping for more later. Keep up your great poeting. Noel from NoelsArt