Sun-Lit Horse Whiskers

awaiting breakfast
a chilly autumn morning
sun-lit horse whiskers

horsehaiku

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Duke Beaufort

March 16, 2024 at 1:51 PM

Well done and with a great picture to boot. It creates a realistic image in my mind. I did a little riding at times and it rings true.

Susan Ashley

March 14, 2024 at 9:20 PM

Dear Don, I adore horses and autumn. Your haiku captures the morning scene with striking imagery and a sense of anticipation. Simply lovely. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Don Iannone

March 14, 2024 at 9:43 PM

Thank you. Haiku and hoses are special to me as well.

Nwachukwu Victor

March 14, 2024 at 4:33 AM

Nice one you got some talent sir I would love to be like you

Don Iannone

March 14, 2024 at 4:42 AM

Thank you. Good luck with your poetry!

Richard Lamoureux

March 12, 2024 at 5:59 PM

This made me smile.

Don Iannone

March 13, 2024 at 6:42 AM

We live near a stable. However, not the one where Jesus was born. It's fun watching the horse frolic in the morning air.

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 9, 2018 at 5:15 PM

Hello Don Jannone, this a beautiful .haiku. Have a nice evening my friend.

Lisa Ricci

September 8, 2018 at 12:25 PM

Hello. I logged on for a moment and somehow noticed your entry by its title. I adore horses and miss my riding days. I remember the horses behaved best in the cooler weather and air. Your format is in true form voice and tone. Thank you for sharing your entry and theme.