William Kelii Kekaula Poet Pantoum

Notes About The Poem

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Poetic Form: Pantoum

Inspired: 2024 August 19

Image: N/A

 

A play of words: Gunfight At The O.K. Corral

Sunlight On The Collectors Quill

Patience meets a quietude of Rosewood,
a quill twixt fingers, held in the left hand.
The trophy collector shares his boyhood,
as a quill fairs right assign no men's land.

A quill twixt fingers, held in the left hand.
A hallway clock grows in the midday sun,
as a quill fairs right assign no men's land.
Two men stand, no one out, son of a gun.

A hallway clock grows in the midday sun,
The trophy collector shares his boyhood.
Two men stand, no one out, son of a gun.
Patience meets a quietude of Rosewood.

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Regina Mcintosh August 20, 2024 at 12:04 AM Wonderful. Reminds me of the oldies... westerns, Gunsmoke, Big Valley, the greats. Love and prayers, Gina William Kelii Kekaula August 20, 2024 at 5:21 PM Mahalo to another angel temporal break at Heaven’s nonexistent water cooler albeit found let a drip find an Hawaiian Punch smile. Aloha William

Victor Buhagiar August 19, 2024 at 11:14 PM It required great inspiration to write a pantoum. You did it quite well. William Kelii Kekaula August 20, 2024 at 5:12 PM Ah, time for a breather of peace after a wagon train surrounded by babies—I wrote a parody of my title after your comment. Alohy William