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Poetic Form: Pantoum
Inspired: 2024 August 19
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A play of words: Gunfight At The O.K. Corral

Patience meets a quietude of Rosewood, a quill twixt fingers, held in the left hand. The trophy collector shares his boyhood, as a quill fairs right assign no men's land. A quill twixt fingers, held in the left hand. A hallway clock grows in the midday sun, as a quill fairs right assign no men's land. Two men stand, no one out, son of a gun. A hallway clock grows in the midday sun, The trophy collector shares his boyhood. Two men stand, no one out, son of a gun. Patience meets a quietude of Rosewood.

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Date: 8/20/2024 12:04:00 AM
Wonderful. Reminds me of the oldies... westerns, Gunsmoke, Big Valley, the greats. Love and prayers, Gina
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/20/2024 5:21:00 PM
Mahalo to another angel temporal break at Heaven’s nonexistent water cooler albeit found let a drip find an Hawaiian Punch smile. Aloha William
Date: 8/19/2024 11:14:00 PM
It required great inspiration to write a pantoum. You did it quite well.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/20/2024 5:12:00 PM
Ah, time for a breather of peace after a wagon train surrounded by babies—I wrote a parody of my title after your comment. Alohy William

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