Sunlight on Paws

Pets Poetry Contest // Sponsored by: Rob Carmack
Contest Judged:  9/7/2025 6:49:00 PM
( 9th Place )

Written: September 02, 2025


He waits at the edge of morning,
ears angled toward a distant sound.
A single breath, a quiet length
then he bounds, unstoppable
through the thin gold sliver of sunlight
that slips underneath the door.

His eyes bring the weight of wonder:
Each step a question, a story.
The flick of his tail is a language of love.
cherishing quiet contentment.
I kneel and he rests in...

A soft warmth burning against my hand
and for a fleeting, perfect heartbeat
the world is nothing but fur,
sunlight and the trust
that lives in the spaces between.

Every flick of his tail brings 
a story only our hearts recall.
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Carmack Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Love how you opened this and that third stanza.
Velasco Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Thank you.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:54 PM
what a joyful poem! There's something heart melting about a dog wagging its tail at us....nicely penned!
Velasco Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:14 AM
Thank you so much! ?? I’m glad it could capture that simple, heart-melting joy—there’s truly nothing like a wagging tail to brighten the day!
Greenhough Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:56 AM
Dogs are man's most loyal companions. Your poem brings back happy memories.
Velasco Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Thank you! I’m so glad it brought back happy memories. Dogs truly have a way of leaving paw prints on our hearts
Williams Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 3:30 AM
Dear Rowena, this is so tender and beautifully observed. The way you’ve captured those small, everyday moments and turned them into something timeless is just magic. I could almost feel the sunlight, the fur, and that unspoken trust woven through the lines...Hugs
Velasco Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words! Big hugs back!
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