Sunlight Image

sunlight image on each incoming wave feel of salt water
Russell Sivey Entered into Heather Ober's "Ocean-ku" contest 4/12/2013
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Mannan Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 10:50 PM
feel of salt water, so beautiful Russell. Many congrats.
A   Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Russell, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda
Jones Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 1:26 PM
I love this beautiful scene you created Russell...congratulations
Bacha Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Oh my friend, i can see the wave arriving to its destination looking great. You are perfect my friend, no book of poetry in your agenda? Russell you really should. Love Terry
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April 18, 2013 at 5:32 PM
Ahh! I can smell the sea and feel the sunshine... Well done Russ! Best wishes, Keith
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April 17, 2013 at 11:56 AM
Dear Russell,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Very vivid.Congratulations. I have read a lot of the "Ocean-ku" entrees and I'm sure YOU will sit in Glory in the Winners Circle.Thank-YOU for my placement in YOUR Contest " Spring Showers " an my gratitude for YOUR Gracious Comments. Soup Mail Call LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
A  Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Your haiku reflects perfect through the sun Russell, an excellent haiku all the way! Much Love and respect ~*~ SKAT
Horne Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 12:55 PM
awesome haiku, my friend
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April 13, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always appreciated..Yes, my work "Over Zealous" is out of character for me..The idea came from my husband..The Game Warden fell from a tree trying to catch someone doing something wrong and ended up disabled..Sara
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April 13, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Russell, this is a very pleasant image. I am loving these ocean haiku!
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April 13, 2013 at 5:49 AM
Vivid image of the sea!
Gorelick Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 9:38 PM
nothing like a walk on the beach. Enjoyed going there in your poem. BG
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April 12, 2013 at 9:24 PM
Hello Russell, a nice walk on the beach... love the exfoliating feeling. Heather, is gonna love the haiku. A little suntan lotion will go great with the ocean-ku. good luck... Linda
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