Sunless

this day is somber like thoughts clouds swell with eyes awaiting winter's wrath to fall silently

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Running Wolves

Date: 12/16/2019 3:23:00 PM

Nice poem, expecting snow ???

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:15:00 PM

we were all day expecting it, then ice, we had a little snow but not enough to stick, and then ice...but now rain and will be rainy again tomorrow... welcome to winter... :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2019 2:13:00 PM

- A lovely poem, dear Sandra :) - Many people need some sunshine these days - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:14:00 PM

Thank you my sweet friend...i wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas season as well...still keeping you in my thoughts and prayers...hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/16/2019 1:50:00 PM

No sun here in Maryland, either..tomorrow is rain as well--but there's always the day after. I feel the somber vibes in your poem, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:13:00 PM

we never really got the snow they were calling for...some ice but rain tomorrow here as well...but it's better than a blizzard right? hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/16/2019 11:12:00 AM

Simple, short and beautifully sad. I need to find your smile and return it to you, I know I saw it around here somewhere.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 11:16:00 AM

While you are at it can you find the sun too? Hugs