Sunless

this day
is somber
like thoughts

clouds swell
with eyes
awaiting
winter's wrath
to fall
silently
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 12/16/2019 3:23:00 PM
Nice poem, expecting snow ???
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:15:00 PM
we were all day expecting it, then ice, we had a little snow but not enough to stick, and then ice...but now rain and will be rainy again tomorrow... welcome to winter... :)
Date: 12/16/2019 2:13:00 PM
- A lovely poem, dear Sandra :) - Many people need some sunshine these days - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:14:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend...i wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas season as well...still keeping you in my thoughts and prayers...hugs
Date: 12/16/2019 1:50:00 PM
No sun here in Maryland, either..tomorrow is rain as well--but there's always the day after. I feel the somber vibes in your poem, Sandy.
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Date: 12/16/2019 7:13:00 PM
we never really got the snow they were calling for...some ice but rain tomorrow here as well...but it's better than a blizzard right? hugs
Date: 12/16/2019 11:12:00 AM
Simple, short and beautifully sad. I need to find your smile and return it to you, I know I saw it around here somewhere.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 11:16:00 AM
While you are at it can you find the sun too? Hugs
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