Sunken Treats

Sunken Treats

Sea swells lost my memoirs of HER
Under waves to caustic mire and murk’s DESIRE
Never to be seen again, that’s how it IS
Kegs of rum float up though, through ghostly grays, FOR
Eternity which finally released them, but not MY 
Note book and papers of my lost LOVE

Terrible things are in the underworld DEEP
Real emptiness and pain score my lonely FEELINGS
Ethereal measures from sea and storm EMERGE
Arise from hidden secret depths, WITH
Treasures of my sweet wife, love mementos as I wait to see, THE
Summoned property that was buried beneath the WAVES
                                         

                                                                                         Acrostic Contest
                                                                                         created: 4/26/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 23, 2014 at 9:38 PM
ANOTHER NICE WIN.. EARL sweet Acrostic, win... SKAT
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May 24, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Good morning SKAT, I had never done an acrostic before. It was fun. Thank you for commenting. I hope you enjoyed it. Have a great day. Earl
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May 20, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Creative way to go for the contest..Great win..Congrats..Sara
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May 24, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Good morning Sara, Thank you so much. Take care. Earl
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May 20, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you so much. I do appreciate it. Have a great day. Earl
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May 17, 2014 at 8:36 PM
A great loss well documented. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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May 18, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Hi Joyce, Thank you so much. I know this is a dark and deep piece. I actually had to employ some of my contemplative faculties to make it work. (without pay of course....We're not unionized.) I guess what I'm trying to say is; this poem was difficult to write but rewarding. Thanks again for your kind words, Earl
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May 17, 2014 at 11:08 AM
An emotional deep wonderful write Earl ! Congrats on merited win !
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May 17, 2014 at 1:17 PM
Good Afternoon Dr. Sharma. I deeply appreciate your kind words. Thank you very much. Have a great day. Earl
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