Sunken Rose Garden

She sits surrounded
By the romance of roses.
Close to being great,
A lady, at last.

On the milky viranda,
Along the perrfume path,
Like the dew drenched flower,
Reposed and waiting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 22, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Beautifully written!! Lovely imagery here..placed my mind at ease when I read this...regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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April 22, 2013 at 3:30 PM
Another lovely view, Sharon, I like the deep imagery here. i find patients and comfort in your poem...xox~ Linda
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