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Sunflowers Enough

and this prosperity of what is dull? what is definitely commonplace? the repetitive the redundancy the massification of nonsense in the form of words so many birds and horizons and ocean waves sunflowers and moonlights and scorching suns we will all be so interested in the leaves of grass and insects? as beautiful and interesting as they are we are doing all this just to hide the hole inside the soul the blade of truth is sharp and the sentence of the guilty is unforgettable I'm not even complacent with myself anymore the demanding the critic I'm looking for the definitive the torturous and necessary philosophy that could finally light up our dark roads of naive travelers lost and anguished in the tedious mire of comfort

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Date: 3/12/2022 7:53:00 PM
Wow! The two lines that particularly intrigued me were "We are doing this just to hide the hole inside the soul/the blade of truth is sharp...." So true, Marco, and expressed in this manner is chilling. I also found the phrase "in the tedious mire of comfort" exceptional.
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Date: 3/12/2022 11:15:00 AM
This is a fair point, Marco. How many Spring has Sprung poems can we write, lol? Of course, a topic in a contest could direct people to "torturous and necessary philosophy". Another idea would be under Forums/Collaboration, getting people to post quatrains or verses or whatever under a specific topic. We did this in a silly fashion with Limericks, but I think the concept would apply to more serious things. Keep posting, friend!
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Marco Chies
Date: 3/12/2022 12:22:00 PM
Thanks for your insightful reply, Jeff!

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