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Embedded deeply in trickles of rain; I grasp love’s ending as my head lays down On a field of blossoms, their tresses agleam, Curtsying gaily unto April winds... Dear sunflower, sunflower, lift me high Your lustrous twirls beheld to these cold eyes; In fresh revelry, a tearful heart whispers For daylight of change… now a bud ablaze, Igniting my faith, reborn like your sway To dance again through heavenly prayers! Contest 204 for Brian Strand Reposted 9/17/2016

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/20/2016 7:43:00 AM

As always, I'm always in awe of your descriptive articulated poems, net!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2016 11:01:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win nette..

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/19/2016 12:00:00 PM

Sunflowers are beautiful and so is your ode! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2016 12:24:00 PM

great poem Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2016 11:46:00 AM

Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 1:54:00 AM

Nette, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/17/2016 4:56:00 PM

Dear Nette First of all WOW, love these lines there so rich and full of emotional description , love it girl I'll give it a seven for it's brilliance, and thanks for your comments also but I like yours better my dear, take care and thanks for the prayers and best wishes, cheri

Paul Callus

Date: 4/17/2016 2:34:00 PM

Hi Nette! I don't want to sound repetitive, but each time I read a poem of yours I can't help saying 'excellent' or 'beautiful'. You always deliver, as with this sunflower poem which interprets the proffered image so well. #7 hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2016 2:22:00 PM

- A touching and great poems, Nette - Good luck in the the contest - (I had a busy weekend, no time for "the soup") - Hope your weekend was lovely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

Date: 4/17/2016 10:09:00 AM

The sunflower has had strong effect on many artists - Van Gogh, and how about the scene in Dr, Zhivago. I like the opening bright yellow on black - kind of ethereal. I read this several times, decided it was like much of modern poetry and music. You read or listen for effect and not for form. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/17/2016 9:23:00 AM

I'm going to be honest Nette... I have many great poem... but none which I was looking for. Yes, this is great. If memory serves me correctly, I had one entry close to the imagery I was looking for. Of course you did marvelous with the depth of the picture, but did not hit the words I was searching for. Thank you for getting this one in. It will have great placement in my contest ... Love Linda

Leon Datu

Date: 4/17/2016 5:49:00 AM

Exceptional! From a tortured soul to a hopeful bud, your poetic shift is profound and artistic!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/17/2016 4:09:00 AM

This is stunning! I hope to see it a top winner Nette! # 7 ;)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/17/2016 1:00:00 AM

Very nice write.I enjoyed............hugs