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In A bed They grow tall Golden yellow Blossoms surround seed Pods of dark brown beauty Prickly, scratchy leaves upon Strong, sturdy green stalks that reach high Aiming for illuminating sun

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Gail Debole

Date: 1/1/2024 3:42:00 PM

Your descriptive words add a valuable dimension to this beautiful picture. I can imagine a whole field of these flowers and appreciate the opportunity to have my thoughts steered toward a warmer time of the year.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2024 3:26:00 AM

Why, thank you, Gail. A field of sunflowers is a beautiful sight, and the seeds are used for so many things. Beauty and usefulness is awesome. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/22/2023 1:37:00 AM

Wow, this is such a beautiful poem, dear Sara.. I loveeee Sunflowers and you've described their elegance in such a mellifluous way! I love your wordplay here and the imageries that you've created.. They feel so mesmerizing! "Strong, sturdy green stalks that reach high,Aiming for illuminating sun" I absolutely enjoyed reading this a lot, sending you light, best wishes and hugs ~ :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2023 1:40:00 AM

Hiya, I am so glad you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 12/21/2023 11:43:00 PM

Hello Sarah, This concise depiction captures the very essence of its theme. The most salient features are cleverly sculpted on each line. Wonderful Kind regards Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2023 1:39:00 AM

Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/21/2023 4:32:00 PM

Sunflowers are one of my favorites and I can see by the comments that I am not the only one ... It was so nice to read about these flowers in the middle of a chilly winter season... Very well written, Sara :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2023 1:38:00 AM

Yes, I was hoping that it would bring just a slight bit of sunshine into the day or night for each one, Kelly. Here's hoping your day was made brighter. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 12/21/2023 12:04:00 PM

You concise and vivid poem paints a beautiful and natural picture of growth and vitality. The brevity of the lines contributes to the simplicity and purity of the imagery. The central theme of growth is evident from the opening lines with the mention of a bed, which serves as a nurturing space for the subject.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2023 1:35:00 AM

Yes, that bed has to be prepared so it will be nurtured, SO. Thanks for the nice and encouraging review of my work. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/21/2023 10:50:00 AM

You have adeptly crafted a poignant poem that exudes superb beauty. It is excellent! Certainly, how you have interwoven your words to depict the sunflowers in such vibrant detail is unique.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2023 1:33:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate your high praise. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 12/21/2023 9:30:00 AM

Wow this is gorgeous! I love sunflowers and the way you’ve written in such a descriptive manner truly left me in awe mesmerised! I especially love “ Strong, sturdy green stalks that reach high“ seamless alliterations: pleasure always reading you. Sending you light always.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2023 9:39:00 AM

Why, thank you IE. Your visits always add a special touch. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/21/2023 7:19:00 AM

Beautiful flowers they are too Sara, we always have a few in our garden in summertime. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2023 9:39:00 AM

They are a lovely addition to a garden and the birds do love those seeds once they dry out. Thanks for your visit, Tom. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K