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Sunflowers

xanthic sunflowers
fields ablaze with golden blooms …
rainbow arcs in sky

Haiku or Senyru Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Constance La France

07/23/20

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Alkas Poetry

August 15, 2020 at 3:14 AM

Rainbow on earth, as well as in the sky, moments of glory when a beautiful poem is realized ... salute alkas

Jan Allison

August 15, 2020 at 11:54 AM

that's such a sweet comment thank you:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

August 3, 2020 at 7:31 AM

I don't think I saw that this was POTD before I went away (for a bit), so here's to you, Jan, for POTD, with your lines about the sunniest flower on this orb. Kudos, Gershon

Jan Allison

August 4, 2020 at 2:40 PM

welcome back GW:-) hope you are keeping well:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

August 2, 2020 at 5:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Jan.

Jan Allison

August 4, 2020 at 2:39 PM

thanks line:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

July 29, 2020 at 4:35 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest and also congratulations on your POTD with this excellent write, a FAV for me and I love your image too _Constance

Jan Allison

August 4, 2020 at 2:17 PM

thanks Constance I think i write some of my best poetry for your contests!:-) hugs jan xx

Aditi Mishra

July 28, 2020 at 11:54 AM

Beautiful sunflowers with the golden bloom Jan. Congratulations on your win and POTD :) Blessings and love! :)

Jan Allison

August 4, 2020 at 2:16 PM

thanks Aditi:-) hugs jan xx

Patri Venkata Ramana

July 28, 2020 at 2:53 AM

Congrats on you top win!

Jan Allison

July 28, 2020 at 12:04 PM

thanks Patri:-) hugs jan x

Paul Callus

July 27, 2020 at 1:54 PM

Just realized that this has been awarded POTD, Jan...Congratulations! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

July 28, 2020 at 12:03 PM

thanks so much Paul:-) hugs jan xx

V. Deepa

July 27, 2020 at 1:00 AM

Loved the golden blooms...Jan mam:-) Congratulations on your top win:-) Keep inspiring.Much love:-)

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:30 PM

thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph Soper

July 27, 2020 at 12:13 AM

well done, reminds of fields in central spain.. congrats on the win

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:30 PM

thanks Joseph that is a sight that must be wonderful to see:-) hugs jan xx

Jenish Somadas

July 26, 2020 at 10:12 PM

Wonderful imagery Jan.. Congrats on your great win...

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:24 PM

Thanks Jenish:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2020 at 4:50 PM

and potd too. They got it RIGHT!!

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:23 PM

aww thanks ... i;d never even heard of haiku until I joined soup!!:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2020 at 4:49 PM

I remember this one and just loving it. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:22 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

July 26, 2020 at 3:16 PM

Back with congratulations on your win with these beautiful Haiku. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:22 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2020 at 2:59 PM

What a lovely scene you’ve painted with your words! Congratulations!

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:13 PM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

July 26, 2020 at 1:03 PM

Congratulations on POTD Jan! Now I have to run to my dictionary to look up that word.

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:08 PM

Its a word I learned on soup;-0 far more poetic than yellow!:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 26, 2020 at 11:25 AM

- Congratulations ... one more time, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:04 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

July 26, 2020 at 11:15 AM

A three-liner with lovely imagery, Jan. Congratulations on your top placement. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:04 PM

Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

July 26, 2020 at 11:14 AM

Third visit, tell me if I'm being a pest lol. Congrats on your 1st place win Tom

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:01 PM

lol Tom you can drop by a 4th time if you like lol:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman

July 26, 2020 at 10:26 AM

Back with more congratulations on your winning haiku. Very special, Jan!

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:00 PM

Thanks so much Sam:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

July 26, 2020 at 9:38 AM

I love sunflowers with their big smiley faces and your haiku is exquisite my friend. Sending many congrats for your POTD. With kindest thoughts and sunflower smiles from Ann xx

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 4:00 PM

Thanks Ann I surprise myself with my writing sometimes lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

July 26, 2020 at 9:35 AM

Congrats JAN to win first place. Hugs

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 3:55 PM

Thanks Anisha-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

July 25, 2020 at 11:11 PM

Beautiful Jan, your description is mind blowing, I love sunflowers - we had a farm opposite us before we sold, one year he planted mealies (corn) the next year he always planted sunflowers. Congratulations dear friend on being awarded POTD. - a wonderful honor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison

July 27, 2020 at 3:53 PM

Thanks so much Jennifer, it must be wonderful to see it for real:-) hugs Jan xx