Sunflower Rises

Conquering new territories climbing up the stairway
new beginnings hanging on the edge of a dream
an empire arises from dark ashes flash petals catch one gem

Through honeycombed dewdrops softly spinning
golden the sparkle upon your tabernacle silken touch
vision of deep beauty shines immaculate heart

Beholding rose gold sparkles crown
sugar coating light dazzling before the eyes
crystal sparks ignite rainbow gleams 

Through a mist of tears travelling one picture 
everything shrinks in your shadow perfect
sunbeams warmly come alive 

Touching clouds dancing with teardrops 
falling over an angel salted from the ocean
seagulls lament faraway distant overseas calls 



 (Unrhymed Tercet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/20/2015 6:27:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 9/20/2015 2:22:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! Radiant and most perfect with each word, images, and verse!! This Sunflower Rises for sure with this most enchanting write. Outstanding Mate!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:35:00 PM
Hi Liam!Another very beautiful,romantic, magical,sweet, n' captivating love poem, you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it!A most beautiful,romantic, dreamy,sweet enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Very heartfelt.Just wonderful!Great imagery.Excellent!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++! A Fav! To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I'm so very happy to see you writing and posting again today Liam.I really hope and pray with all my heart n' soul that you're okay in everything Liam.Sending you my prayers.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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