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Started wondering how it would feel to be in your arms. Uncertain, I would be able to tell if your pulse is vibrating. Nonetheless, I'd like to daydream about our happiness ahead. Fantasizing about how we'd run to the beach at sunrise. Lavishly witting the fresh sunrays to relish our fondness. Only gazing into the sky without saying a single word. When the wind blows, you stretch out your hands to hold me. Extending thru the twilight sky, you are the hope in my heart. Revived moon shone your eyes while you hexed your pledge. Written: May 19, 2021 Sunflower Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/22/2021 8:49:00 AM

A beautiful write and pictures. I wish I was on that beach with those birds. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/22/2021 9:14:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely comment, and have a blessed weekend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2021 3:59:00 PM

You wrote romantically just as the judge wanted. I think you did a beautiful job here.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/21/2021 5:12:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, your comment and reading are so much appreciated, best regards

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/20/2021 9:27:00 PM

A beautifully imagined tale of a love affair in full bloom. I enjoyed this immensely, Lasaad. Blessings, Evelyn

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/21/2021 5:29:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words dear Evelyn, your comment is so encouraging, have a blessed night

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/20/2021 7:43:00 PM

Romance in ambedo trance! Soft, soothing visualisation. All the best for the contest, Lassad

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/20/2021 8:02:00 PM

Thanks, my friend, for reading and commenting; I'm so glad you like it; my very best wishes to you, Blessings, and best regards

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/20/2021 9:23:00 AM

A tenderly written romantic Acrosto with superb imagery, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good luck ! Blessings

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/20/2021 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for your wonderful visit and comment Dearest friend Demetrios, blessings and love//lasaad

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/20/2021 8:59:00 AM

Wow what a dreamy romantic poem imagining of future together with your love. Kudos for a fab muse. -------------->>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<< Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/19/2021 11:00:00 PM

As the sun rises so will the flower and it will see the end of the hex......until sunset. Lovely poem, great imagery.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/20/2021 1:00:00 PM

Thanks for your nice comment and lovely visit dear Victor

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/19/2021 7:45:00 PM

Very romantic, Lasaad. Nicely-penned and rich with images. This should do well in Malabika's contest.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/20/2021 1:02:00 PM

Thanks, dearest friend Milton; I hope you are doing good. Always nice and comforting to see your nice words, blessings, and regards

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/19/2021 4:44:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, What a lovely and romantic entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Soupmail

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/20/2021 1:03:00 PM

Dearest Alexis, thanks for commenting and for the soupmail, so much appreciated// blessings and hugs