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Sunflower

Started wondering how it would feel to be in your arms.

Uncertain, I would be able to tell if your pulse is vibrating.

Nonetheless, I'd like to daydream about our happiness ahead.

Fantasizing about how we'd run to the beach at sunrise.

Lavishly witting the fresh sunrays to relish our fondness.

Only gazing into the sky without saying a single word.

When the wind blows, you stretch out your hands to hold me.

Extending thru the twilight sky, you are the hope in my heart.

Revived moon shone your eyes while you hexed your pledge.

Written: May 19, 2021

Sunflower Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 8:49 AM
A beautiful write and pictures. I wish I was on that beach with those birds. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Thanks for your lovely comment, and have a blessed weekend
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 3:59 PM
You wrote romantically just as the judge wanted. I think you did a beautiful job here.
Poet Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 5:12 PM
Thanks, Andrea, your comment and reading are so much appreciated, best regards
Buehler Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 9:27 PM
A beautifully imagined tale of a love affair in full bloom. I enjoyed this immensely, Lasaad. Blessings, Evelyn
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May 21, 2021 at 5:29 PM
Thanks for the kind words dear Evelyn, your comment is so encouraging, have a blessed night
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 7:43 PM
Romance in ambedo trance! Soft, soothing visualisation. All the best for the contest, Lassad
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Thanks, my friend, for reading and commenting; I'm so glad you like it; my very best wishes to you, Blessings, and best regards
Trifiatis Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 9:23 AM
A tenderly written romantic Acrosto with superb imagery, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good luck ! Blessings
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Thanks for your wonderful visit and comment Dearest friend Demetrios, blessings and love//lasaad
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Wow what a dreamy romantic poem imagining of future together with your love. Kudos for a fab muse. -------------->>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<< Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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May 19, 2021 at 11:00 PM
As the sun rises so will the flower and it will see the end of the hex......until sunset. Lovely poem, great imagery.
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Thanks for your nice comment and lovely visit dear Victor
Hankins Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:45 PM
Very romantic, Lasaad. Nicely-penned and rich with images. This should do well in Malabika's contest.
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Thanks, dearest friend Milton; I hope you are doing good. Always nice and comforting to see your nice words, blessings, and regards
Y. Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Hi Lasaad, What a lovely and romantic entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Soupmail
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Dearest Alexis, thanks for commenting and for the soupmail, so much appreciated// blessings and hugs
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