Sundrops

Like rain drops but not ??
06/08/2023



A collaborative poem by:

°Chelsea Marie StufLeben
& my 9 year old daughter,
• Claire Christine Maki


•A dark stormy day, 
With the city at Bay.

°Way off in the distance,
was a luminant ray.

•While the city was dark,
the people would say

•It was not a good day,
for the clouds to be grey.

°Why oh why,
won't the clouds go away?

°•Will we ever see Sun,
or its bright gleeful day?

•Oh look! Said a man,
On the streets of his town.

•°As he saw the clouds fade,
And the sun was now found.

°But even more brilliant,
The raindrops now glistened.

°•They'd turned to sundrops,
the town pridefully listened.

•To the birds as they chirped,
Far off in the distance.

•°They soaked in the sun,
In it's vitalized essence. 

•So now that they bathed,
In the light of the Sun.

•their hearts were all full,
Joy had filled everyone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Meadows Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:01 PM
A good poem. Well done.
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