Sundrops

Let’s spread our wings with our love Fly through beautiful, infinite places Leave kisses in the sky, to float with clouds Then permeate through the drifting gray With colorful pigmentation from our hearts Then, rest in the Sundrops blooming on the ground - Simultaneously - In each other’s arms, amid bright yellow petals In brief respite, before we fly again...and again Heidi Sands 6/15/18

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/15/2018 12:17:00 PM

Nicely done , Heidi, love the imagery! ..... Hugs Eve ~' *

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2018 1:12:00 PM

Thank you very much Eve :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/15/2018 12:13:00 PM

a lover's realm where the soul has wings...my first thought after reading your poem of love...

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2018 1:12:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughtful comment Frederic :)

Mark Toney

Date: 6/15/2018 12:04:00 PM

Heidi, you elevated us to float with the clouds and then we lightly touched down to the beautiful Sundrops. Fly, rest, repeat. All we need is love. I had to fav this so I can find it later.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2018 12:06:00 PM

Thank you Mark. I am happy to hear it is a fav. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/15/2018 11:55:00 AM

Sounds like a delightful journey..well articulated imagery.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2018 12:06:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear that :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/15/2018 11:09:00 AM

Such a sweet verse

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2018 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Tim :)