Sundial and Sandclock

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SUN DIAL and SAND CLOCK

        Sand clock or an hour- glass:
        A device of two bulbs with small slit at the junction,
        sand dusts to pass 
      
         Using sunray
         Sundial shows Sun’s direction
         at day.

         Sun-Sand
         clocks to mention
          Grand!

        Sand clock or an hour- glass.
         Sundial shows Sun’s direction.
         Grand!
     
        01/25/ 21


   Sun- Sand Minichu Contest by Mohan Chutani

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2021 2:11:00 PM

Both are interesting ways of telling time. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 7:14:00 AM

Very nice Anisha...I love your take on the theme. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 3:40:00 AM

Anisha, thanx for participating in my contest. A perfect Minichu linking sun and sand with the sundial and clock- a unique concept in this contest so far. Would have placed higher but for your title that was to be what was requested. Anyway, Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan