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The way the poem is showing up on the page is not the same as on the page where I typed it in...This is Maximilian Sunflower..
Nip in the air speaks loudly Seek a warmer place in the sun Sun slowly speaks with a southern drawl Her lavender dress creeping behind Trailing a beautiful skirt on morn's horizon Max, Maximilian Sunflower almost outsparkles the early sun The sun that slowly glows orange through the Leland Cyrpress and woodsy trees Whitey waits huddled against the corner post cold needing Sun to hurry along so she can climb onto the roof enjoying the radiant heat Nip wants to send me away so that warmth will penetrate aching bones Desiring to visit with the weak crowing rooster's song for just a moment longer Those moments that are swiftly passing now as the sun's radiant golden light comes higher with sun loosing her gown of lavender Becoming naked before the earth for their joining of spirits to reciprocate love for each other Thanks to God for the day and for the life and beauty to enjoy once more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/7/2011 10:41:00 AM
This is so beautiful Sara...so enjoyable...and thanks for the nice comments...Hope you're doing okay...Marty
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Date: 10/5/2011 7:09:00 PM
Top spot for me is this Sara...good to see your inspiration..
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Date: 10/3/2011 9:01:00 AM
Good Morning, Dear Sara,, how are you this beautiful morning? Well it is here in TEXAS,, by the way, Texas is a very warm place most seek... And the sun flowers here,, do reach the sky... I've seen sun flowers over,, 7 ft tall... i kid you not... he he! and them roosters here,,, hahah! they are not enjoyable, or have a desiring sound... enjoyed your wonderful poem,, Have yourself a wonderful morning,. I know I sure am....p.d.
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Date: 10/2/2011 10:32:00 PM
Such a beatiful poem, Sara.. It would be a pleasure to be sitting there with you, and see what you see! Lovely poem!!
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:46:00 PM
sound like a peaceful morning, the traffic here is roaring, but you are with the quiet of the day, so if i may, i say... lovely verse of the morning babe...
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:09:00 PM
Awesome imagery and visuals, Sara. A real beauty, my friend
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:06:00 PM
Beautiful story, Sara. I take it that this is for the nature story contest? It's so nice.
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Date: 10/2/2011 10:24:00 AM
You have out done your self with a beautiful painting of moving pictues... A true poet , that you are.... love Michael
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Date: 10/2/2011 9:14:00 AM
Oh Sara b! What a wonderful write this is..I really enjoyed .. Those moments that are swiftly passing now as the sun's radiant golden light comes higher....my fav lines.
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Date: 10/2/2011 9:10:00 AM
Tell me about needing the sun...its freezing here Sara, Awesome poem and cool piccy x0x
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