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The way the poem is showing up on the page is not the same as on the page where I typed it in...This is Maximilian Sunflower..

Sunday's Gift Out On the Porch

Nip in the air speaks loudly
Seek a warmer place in the sun
Sun slowly speaks with a southern drawl
Her lavender dress creeping behind 
Trailing a beautiful skirt on morn's horizon
Max, Maximilian Sunflower almost outsparkles the early sun
The sun that slowly glows orange through the Leland Cyrpress and woodsy trees
Whitey waits huddled against the corner post cold needing Sun to hurry along so she can 
climb onto the roof enjoying the radiant heat
Nip wants to send me away so that warmth will penetrate aching bones
Desiring to visit with the weak crowing rooster's song for just a moment longer
Those moments that are swiftly passing now as the sun's radiant golden light comes higher
with sun loosing her gown of lavender
Becoming naked before the earth for their joining of spirits to reciprocate love for each other
Thanks to God for the day and for the life and beauty to enjoy once more!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Owens Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 10:41 AM
This is so beautiful Sara...so enjoyable...and thanks for the nice comments...Hope you're doing okay...Marty
Maverick Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Top spot for me is this Sara...good to see your inspiration..
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October 3, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Good Morning, Dear Sara,, how are you this beautiful morning? Well it is here in TEXAS,, by the way, Texas is a very warm place most seek... And the sun flowers here,, do reach the sky... I've seen sun flowers over,, 7 ft tall... i kid you not... he he! and them roosters here,,, hahah! they are not enjoyable, or have a desiring sound... enjoyed your wonderful poem,, Have yourself a wonderful morning,. I know I sure am....p.d.
Richards Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 10:32 PM
Such a beatiful poem, Sara.. It would be a pleasure to be sitting there with you, and see what you see! Lovely poem!!
Johnson Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 6:46 PM
sound like a peaceful morning, the traffic here is roaring, but you are with the quiet of the day, so if i may, i say... lovely verse of the morning babe...
Horne Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Awesome imagery and visuals, Sara. A real beauty, my friend
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Beautiful story, Sara. I take it that this is for the nature story contest? It's so nice.
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October 2, 2011 at 10:24 AM
You have out done your self with a beautiful painting of moving pictues... A true poet , that you are.... love Michael
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October 2, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Oh Sara b! What a wonderful write this is..I really enjoyed .. Those moments that are swiftly passing now as the sun's radiant golden light comes higher....my fav lines.
Edwards Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 9:10 AM
Tell me about needing the sun...its freezing here Sara, Awesome poem and cool piccy x0x
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