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Sunday In March

Sonntag im März / Sunday in March / Un domingo en marzo Kein Lärm der Straße Sonniger Sonntag im März Nur Vogelgezwitscher Ticken der Uhr im Zimmer Wie ein Herzschlag der Technik No road noise A sunny Sunday in March Only the birds' chirp The clock's ticking in the room Like a technical heartbeat No ruido en la calle Soleado domingo de marzo Sólo gorjeo de pájaros El tictac del reloj en el cuarto Como un latido técnico

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/3/2011 7:22:00 PM
a lovely piece of poetry about spring, i really love it when spring finally gets here. thank you for reading two hearts came together and for your comment
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Date: 3/26/2011 10:13:00 AM
The contrast you put here is very nice, liked how your first 3 lines speak of nature and the last lines take on a mechanical route-- could picture both in my mind-- enjoyed your read as always. :)
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Date: 3/24/2011 9:42:00 AM
Don't you just love it when the traffic dies down and you can hear the songs of nature. The ticking clock is a reminder that time is passing so quickly. Excellent poem, Gert! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:28:00 AM
Wishing u well today my dear friend.. as we are still in snow and freezing rain.. nice to read your warm words once again luv..
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:53:00 PM
I'm sorry to hear your arm and hand are still hurting, Gert. I do hope you'll feel better soon. Here's my poem - hope you think it's OK? Love’s soft petals fall Leaving bare thorny branches Heady perfume gone But with care and attention From one rose grows a bouquet Yes, I'd be very grateful if you'd translate for me please : ) Love from Jack
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:43:00 PM
Good day Gert, here i am always enjoying your words.. wow! I'm so in love with the technical heartbeat i can find in my silence around me.. except for mine is like always every morning... you know Texas.. already sunny.... I'm glad your enjoying your Sundays the way we all should.. take care,..p.d..
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Date: 3/23/2011 10:22:00 AM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments and concern Gert. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2011 9:06:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Gert - wish it was so quiet here on a Sunday! I probably need a hair transplant, and liposuction (on my belly), but I won't worry about the things my mirror shows me either LOL. Thanks for sending the poem - it's beautiful - I'll work on my half tonight. Hope your arm and hand get better soon. Love from Jack : )
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:04:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Gert. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2011 6:13:00 AM
Nice analogy of the clock with the heart, Gert
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Date: 3/23/2011 5:29:00 AM
A lovely Spring vision in your lines Gert my friend.. feeling and hearing the visuals so well luv.. it is snowing here today so will pray your lines come true very soon for us here in USA... enough Winter..bring Spring to life.. as your words bring me to life each time I read them my friend..luv..
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