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Sunday Birds

Sunday birds up early, brightly singing,
               resurrecting their refrain -
            releasing Sabbath rest

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Paige Hind

Date: 2/14/2024 4:53:00 PM

Beautiful! It's so weird-I wrote a poem about birds, too! I will post it after I catch up on my commenting. Beautiful work, Kim. <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:43:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/13/2024 12:22:00 PM

It's great to see the birds back. I just saw a robin yesterday. It's a nice sound to wake up to. Thanks for this as I shall look at the birds a bit differently!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:42:00 PM

Yay! Thank you, dear Duke!

Valsa George

Date: 2/13/2024 4:53:00 AM

Beautifully written Kimo, dear Kim. We wake up from sleep hearing the beautiful trilling of birds

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:41:00 PM

A sweet way to start the day! :) Blessings!

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/12/2024 10:21:00 PM

enjoyed your fine and subtle poem, thanks Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:40:00 PM

Thank You, Yann! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/12/2024 6:30:00 PM

Very clever second line there, ma'am. ~ Lyndon Bird Johnson

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2024 8:42:00 PM

Thank you, and LOL on the Lyndon Bird…

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2024 11:49:00 AM

Awesome that Sunday birds are up early singing. So nice to know that some people get up happy on Sunday to enjoy worship. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2024 3:45:00 PM

Amen! The best part of the day!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2024 11:12:00 AM

I really enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I love hearing birds singing any day of the week... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2024 3:46:00 PM

I do took,:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/12/2024 3:37:00 AM

I admire your haikus. Mine will be posted much later if I ever post them. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2024 9:13:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! xx

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/11/2024 7:55:00 AM

Oh, a creative kimo this is, beautiful poetess.. You do this form very well.. Love the vivid imagery that you've incorporated within few words, so effortlessly and impeccably. It reflects a comforting aura and the soothing ambience of Sunday morning.. Beautifully crafted. Sending you many best wishes and light! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2024 10:38:00 AM

Thank you! Love hearing the first birds of the day! Wanted to catch the joy in this poem! Hugs!

Sunday Birds

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