Sunday Birds

Sunday birds up early, brightly singing,
               resurrecting their refrain -
            releasing Sabbath rest
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Hind Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 4:53 PM
Beautiful! It's so weird-I wrote a poem about birds, too! I will post it after I catch up on my commenting. Beautiful work, Kim. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Beaufort Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 12:22 PM
It's great to see the birds back. I just saw a robin yesterday. It's a nice sound to wake up to. Thanks for this as I shall look at the birds a bit differently!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 8:42 PM
Yay! Thank you, dear Duke!
George Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 4:53 AM
Beautifully written Kimo, dear Kim. We wake up from sleep hearing the beautiful trilling of birds
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 8:41 PM
A sweet way to start the day! :) Blessings!
Rolland Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 10:21 PM
enjoyed your fine and subtle poem, thanks Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 8:40 PM
Thank You, Yann! :)
Wolf Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Very clever second line there, ma'am. ~ Lyndon Bird Johnson
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 8:42 PM
Thank you, and LOL on the Lyndon Bird…
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Awesome that Sunday birds are up early singing. So nice to know that some people get up happy on Sunday to enjoy worship. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 3:45 PM
Amen! The best part of the day!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 11:12 AM
I really enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I love hearing birds singing any day of the week...  Have a blessed day writing away..........................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 3:46 PM
I do took,:)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 3:37 AM
I admire your haikus. Mine will be posted much later if I ever post them. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Thank you, my friend! xx
Sharma  Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Oh, a creative kimo this is, beautiful poetess.. You do this form very well.. Love the vivid imagery that you've incorporated within few words, so effortlessly and impeccably. It reflects a comforting aura and the soothing ambience of Sunday morning.. Beautifully crafted. Sending you many best wishes and light! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 10:38 AM
Thank you! Love hearing the first birds of the day! Wanted to catch the joy in this poem! Hugs!
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