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Sunday Afternoon

Soothing sounds of a Sunday afternoon Low roar of the crowd, touchdown soon Delighted children giggling uncontrollably The family relaxing so comfortably Morning paper around us suitably strewn Written November 7, 2021 HONORABLE MENTION "What Do You Do on Sunday" poetry contest All Poetry, December 3, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/9/2021 7:38:00 AM

This is the Sunday afternoon I did not have until I grew up but I enjoyed it when I got to it.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/9/2021 9:17:00 AM

Oh, I didn't either until I grew up. It was worth the wait, however.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/8/2021 5:39:00 PM

The sound of the bat hitting the ball when watching a cricket match, while having a picnic..... contentment.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/8/2021 7:59:00 PM

Yes, it is, Shirley. I'm glad you had this reaction to my poem. Thanks for sharing.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/8/2021 1:08:00 PM

Great snapshot of so many Sunday afternoons, Milt. As comfortable as a nap in a hammock. Bzzzz, Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/8/2021 3:42:00 PM

Sounds wonderful. Now what I need is a tree on the other side! Thanks, gw.