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Sunday

Today the boy, wanting to stay tuned, grabbed the VR
Sweating profusely, needed a washcloth bathing
Boys don’t enjoy Sundays but they do after all
The class in awe of Revelation, wanting more
         fruit, casserole, sweets and godly treats
We were at the movies when the sermon broke in
and we wept as the sinners waded into the baptismal
Back home, the grabster and the friend on other end
         A friend, who knows not him
Sitting with my wine in a boot, or something like that
Watching Martha, feeling sorry for her but elated
         for she related to the prisoners
It is dark now and rain’s now in my boot
I take a sip and fall asleep
or rather
write a poem, from the hip*

*from the hip - to act impulsively, like drawing a gun from the holster.

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Date: 11/12/2024 3:45:00 PM
You seem to have a lot of empathy, dear Kim- this sent my mind in many directions.... :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2024 4:51:00 PM
I guess I do. Hugs your way!
Date: 11/11/2024 12:40:00 PM
Growing up Sunday were really quiet, but so much has changed now.... Nice poem about your Sunday, dear Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2024 12:47:00 PM
I try to keep mine quiet if at all possible :) Thank you, Silent!
Date: 11/11/2024 2:55:00 AM
- As a child I didn't like Sundays... they were boring (no computer games back then:))) - Now I enjoy its silence - A funny poem from the hip, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2024 6:31:00 AM
I don’t remember being bored on Sundays. I was bored by arcade games. I loved to read and back then I wrote a little. Thank you sweet Anne-Lise! Hugs :)))
Date: 11/10/2024 4:47:00 PM
Your hip-py poem is well received Kim. Though Martha doesn't intrigue me lol. Now the book of Revelation, that's a different story
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2024 5:00:00 PM
LOL…better intrigued by the final book of the bible ;) You made me smile!

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