Tim Smith Poet Lyric

Sunburst - Made Into a Song

Sun brush slow as dawn's light breaks
kiss gently on this heart that wakes
warm up days   til night stand guard
when breeze blows brisk and mighty hard

Tap lightly on her peeked cheek this morn
where thoughts of love and life are born
bring forth to her    peace and hope
and faith in man from words God spoke

Impart comfort and ease in rays you share
lighten our load on that cross we bare
Rise up high and in blue skies do rest
soothe our souls with loyal hearts abreast

Sun brush slow as dawn's light breaks
Paint with grace 'pon swan still lakes

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Arthur Vaso April 16, 2017 at 6:05 PM Beautiful, great when someone puts music to your words!!! :)

Lisa Ricci April 12, 2017 at 5:28 AM Good Morning Tim. Congratulations on this being turned into a song. I just heard it play and it is marvelous. This entry is so peaceful and tranquil not to mention marvelous imagery. We readers and listeners thank you. Well done entirely with so much beauty and grace.

Sara Ella April 12, 2017 at 2:03 AM The music is so soothing and bright - it follows your poem so perfectly <3 A beautiful combination :)

Lynn Marie April 11, 2017 at 4:16 PM So beautiful and calming. I listen to music while in surgery and during medical testing. I will not be without music, it's importance that crucial for my spirit.This would be wonderful to hear to transport the mind somewhere tranquil. Your words are uplifting, the music, sublime. Fabulous write Tim and kudos to Paul for putting your words into a lovely song. a special favexxx

Darren White April 11, 2017 at 11:49 AM This song and the music is sooooo awesome! It's a fave and a 7 from me. Totally worth it. Tim Smith April 11, 2017 at 1:25 PM Thank you my friend.

Charmaine Chircop April 11, 2017 at 10:08 AM It is mesmerizing indeed..How beautiful..So magical..And its gonna get a fave:) :).Im so proud of you dear friend. Tim Smith April 11, 2017 at 10:15 AM Thank you Charma. It is an honour when someone sets your words to music as you know by your poem Little by Little done by Archie Clifford. : )

Chris Green April 11, 2017 at 10:00 AM Tim, the poem is beautiful and the song is so soothing and magical. As if sitting by a meandering stream while listening. Bravo to both of you Tim Smith April 11, 2017 at 10:03 AM Thanks Chris...glad you were able to listen...I'll share the finished product when he is done.

Tim Smith April 11, 2017 at 9:39 AM Please bear with me...Trying to get the audio uploaded...The file is too big

Probir Gupta April 11, 2017 at 9:32 AM beautiful dawn in your beautiful poem ... 'grace 'pon swan still lakes' ... Love them ... Tim Smith April 11, 2017 at 10:12 AM Thanks Probir