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Sunbeams Peeping


rainclouds burst above
~
sunbeams peeping through the clouds
~
sending rainbow smiles


written 10th January 2021

Contest Hi-Ku (6) place promise
Sponsor Brian Strand
10th place

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Jan Allison

January 11, 2021 at 2:06 PM

i found your poem so uplifting Ann, many congrats on your win;-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

January 11, 2021 at 10:38 PM

Bless you and thank you dear Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

January 10, 2021 at 7:09 AM

Beautiful imagery you created Ann in just a few words.

Ann Gilmour

January 10, 2021 at 7:16 AM

Thank you dear Vijay your words mean a lot to me. I hope you are keeping well and safe from this Covid 19. Take care my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

January 10, 2021 at 4:17 AM

A beautiful image Ann, hope you are keeping well. Tom

Ann Gilmour

January 10, 2021 at 7:19 AM

Thank you so much dear Tom. I am trying to fill my head with positivity as all that is happening is depressing me, so today I have stayed in (as advised) and looking out onto the sunshine, have kept away from the many folk who will be walking along the prom on this stunning sunny day.Keep safe and keep well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

January 10, 2021 at 2:52 AM

Such sweetness in your haiku. I love rainbows. ~~

Ann Gilmour

January 10, 2021 at 3:33 AM

Bless you dear Victor ~ who doesn't love a rainbow for they are natures most magical gift when you get soaking wet, haha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Regina Mcintosh

January 10, 2021 at 1:29 AM

Lovely. A great haiku. God bless you friend

Ann Gilmour

January 10, 2021 at 3:30 AM

Awww thank you so much dear Regina for your 'lovely' ~ I truly appreciate your visit my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

January 10, 2021 at 1:27 AM

Ann i adore that last line, love rainbows they are so uplifting:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

January 10, 2021 at 3:28 AM

Last week my neighbour texted 'Rainbow Alert' and when I looked out there was a double rainbow ~ so magical, but within a blink of an eye it was gone. Thank you for your comment dear Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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