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Sun Winked At the Stars

The sky exploded into colors, and sun winked at the stars,
Stars winked at the night, loveliness in black and white!
Day and night met in twilight shadows, a secret rendezvous,
In the deepening purple magic, casting its hypnotic allure.
Bluebirds ceased singing, in adulation of the languid hours,
While the fragrant flowers, drew strange breeze encounters!
Gaiety will have to be waiting, no matter how it is missed,
For the world won't be waking, until the sunrise compromise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 11:39 AM
... WoooW ... beautiful poem, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Gorgeous!
Buehler Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 1:11 AM
Excellent. A meditation of a change in the day from night. Your picture is exquisite. Blessings.
Buehler Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Your thoughts are so inspiring. Thank you. Hugs. :)
Ball Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:50 PM
Lovely as always Evelyn. You describe eventide so beautifully here. I could almost smell night blooming jasmine as I read this. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Thank you for the wonderful compliments, Judy. Have a blessed day, Evelyn :)
Hankins Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 8:58 PM
Another breathtakingly beautiful verse from the pen of Evelyn! Thoroughly enjoyed the read. Your images are so compelling and the illustration was perfect.
Buehler Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:10 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, which are so delighting. Have a wonderful week. :)
Hawkins Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 6:32 PM
This made a beautiful picture in my mind. A lovely peaceful verse. Thank you, Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 6:48 PM
You are so welcome, Shirley. Thanks for your lovely comment.
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