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Sun Visor

sitting on the highway with nothing more to do except to pull down the sun visor so that i could look at you it's almost like your here you look at me and smile your poses for pictures for images frozen it time if i use my imagination we could have a conversation and talk about the things on our minds yes, you make me happy as happy as i can be just by looking at your picture and your smile

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Date: 7/25/2011 5:53:00 PM
This is a cute write John and you expressed your feelings nicely. phyl
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:42:00 AM
enjoyed reading this wonderful well written poem.
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:38:00 AM
Beautiful piece, John. Feelings well expressed. Nice job. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Ralph
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Date: 7/9/2011 12:38:00 PM
Great write that expresses your feelings about April..If I had died while young, my husband would have always had a memory of me as a young woman but now if I died he will carry a memory of an old worn out woman..I can tell that you are still grieving..Sara
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John Loving Iii
Date: 7/9/2011 2:03:00 PM
i am not greiving. i am accepting a gift that only God can give me. and if that makes me cry; the tears are for Him not her. He made me share everything i had with my poetry. and with this i put tears in many eyes so God can see the heart.
Date: 7/9/2011 6:19:00 AM
I feel like I have gone through your mind today....so sorry for your loss. You are young....too young to be alone.
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Date: 7/8/2011 7:53:00 PM
Nice job here my friend. I see you driving and though you are not with your loved one she is with you now until you can be together again. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:56:00 PM
oh so touching John.. such lovely thoughts combine in this emotional elegance luv.. teary eyed as I read these precious lines ..
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Date: 7/8/2011 2:16:00 PM
what leaps out at me from this is poignancy and sadness, not happiness, maybe it's just me...because I happened to look at some old photos myself today, and yes I cried a tear or two...
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John Loving Iii
Date: 7/8/2011 2:25:00 PM
sad you may call it. but it is not. I have both that and you. john
Date: 7/8/2011 2:11:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “How's That for A Smile, My Dear Precious Friend, John Loving the Third *^_^* Or Should I Say 3??? = I Love The Tender Beauty I Find In This Wonderful Painting Amid Poetics Love Brushed Expression == A Very Nice Image Beyound The Visor I Would Say of, Time & Place === My Love Always, Jasper *
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John Loving Iii
Date: 7/8/2011 2:25:00 PM
yes the third.
Date: 7/8/2011 2:06:00 PM
A fun write John enjoyed..
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Date: 7/8/2011 1:53:00 PM
a wonderful song of celebration, john.. i like! :) huggs, nette
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