John Loving Iii Poet Quatrain

Sun Visor

sitting on the highway
with nothing more to do
except to pull down the sun visor
so that i could look at you

it's almost like your here
you look at me and smile
your poses for pictures
for images frozen it time

if i use my imagination
we could have a conversation
and talk about the things
on our minds

yes, you make me happy
as happy as i can be
just by looking at your picture
and your smile

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Phyllis Babcock July 25, 2011 at 5:53 PM This is a cute write John and you expressed your feelings nicely. phyl

James Foulk July 11, 2011 at 11:42 AM enjoyed reading this wonderful well written poem.

Ralph Taylor July 11, 2011 at 10:38 AM Beautiful piece, John. Feelings well expressed. Nice job. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Ralph

Sara Kendrick July 9, 2011 at 12:38 PM Great write that expresses your feelings about April..If I had died while young, my husband would have always had a memory of me as a young woman but now if I died he will carry a memory of an old worn out woman..I can tell that you are still grieving..Sara John Loving Iii July 9, 2011 at 2:03 PM i am not greiving. i am accepting a gift that only God can give me. and if that makes me cry; the tears are for Him not her. He made me share everything i had with my poetry. and with this i put tears in many eyes so God can see the heart.

Doris Culverhouse July 9, 2011 at 6:19 AM I feel like I have gone through your mind today....so sorry for your loss. You are young....too young to be alone.

Judy Ball July 8, 2011 at 7:53 PM Nice job here my friend. I see you driving and though you are not with your loved one she is with you now until you can be together again. Great job. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 8, 2011 at 6:56 PM oh so touching John.. such lovely thoughts combine in this emotional elegance luv.. teary eyed as I read these precious lines ..

Charlotte Puddifoot July 8, 2011 at 2:16 PM what leaps out at me from this is poignancy and sadness, not happiness, maybe it's just me...because I happened to look at some old photos myself today, and yes I cried a tear or two... John Loving Iii July 8, 2011 at 2:25 PM sad you may call it. but it is not. I have both that and you. john

Jl Sadberry July 8, 2011 at 2:11 PM Smile, *^_^* “How's That for A Smile, My Dear Precious Friend, John Loving the Third *^_^* Or Should I Say 3??? = I Love The Tender Beauty I Find In This Wonderful Painting Amid Poetics Love Brushed Expression == A Very Nice Image Beyound The Visor I Would Say of, Time & Place === My Love Always, Jasper * John Loving Iii July 8, 2011 at 2:25 PM yes the third.

Joe Maverick July 8, 2011 at 2:06 PM A fun write John enjoyed..

Nette Onclaud July 8, 2011 at 1:53 PM a wonderful song of celebration, john.. i like! :) huggs, nette