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Sun To the Rescue

Whomp…another clump of ice cycles, lands on the patio.

It’s good to see brother sun; he is tired of the cold.

His fiery temper quickly melts away, old Jack Frosts icy rage.

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Funom Makama

April 14, 2015 at 9:55 AM

discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece....

M. L. Kiser

April 16, 2015 at 8:35 AM

Wow! Thanks so much, Funom. Your wonderful comments are well appreciated. I am so glad that you enjoyed the poem.

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2015 at 11:47 PM

Don't ya just love to see MR.Sun to the rescue. Great one for spring in full bloom!

M. L. Kiser

April 12, 2015 at 3:57 AM

Many thanks, Andrea.

Matthew Anish

April 10, 2015 at 11:02 PM

The winter is finally coming to an end in New York City and as you well put there is an end to the "icy rage". There is a lot of sports poetry - about baseball, track, football and yes, boxing. I volunteer 3 days a week at Poets House which is a 60,000 volume library of poetry. There is plenty of sports poetry there, Peace & Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser

April 12, 2015 at 3:56 AM

Wow, thanks...I hadn't seen much on the web or here, so I wondered. Glad the winter is going there.

Sara Kendrick

April 9, 2015 at 5:19 AM

Enjoyed this one..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara

M. L. Kiser

April 10, 2015 at 4:33 PM

Thanks so much, Sara. I do appreciate the feedback.

James Fraser

April 8, 2015 at 2:48 PM

I love it when the Sun rescues so many situations, and the melting of the icicles and snows is normally a lovely sign that Spring has arrived. Lovely poem MLK, hugs, James :)

M. L. Kiser

April 10, 2015 at 4:35 PM

It's finally arrived here; I have lovely tulips, narcissus and my pear trees are flowering beautifully...seems like we waited so long, but it's finally here...yeaaaaa. Glad that you stopped by to read and comment James; hope your Spring is wonderful.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 8, 2015 at 8:20 AM

I love sunshine M.L. and this one takes me there.. :)!

M. L. Kiser

April 8, 2015 at 12:41 PM

I'm glad...I got a surprise this morning...I have paperwhites blooming and my pear trees are in bloom...finally! I thought spring would never arrive. I appreciate your comments, thanks again.