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Sun To the Rescue

Whomp…another clump of ice cycles, lands on the patio.

It’s good to see brother sun; he is tired of the cold.

His fiery temper quickly melts away, old Jack Frosts icy rage.


 

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Funom Makama Date: 4/14/2015 9:55:00 AM discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece.... Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/16/2015 8:35:00 AM Wow! Thanks so much, Funom. Your wonderful comments are well appreciated. I am so glad that you enjoyed the poem.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/10/2015 11:47:00 PM Don't ya just love to see MR.Sun to the rescue. Great one for spring in full bloom! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/12/2015 3:57:00 AM Many thanks, Andrea.

Matthew Anish Date: 4/10/2015 11:02:00 PM The winter is finally coming to an end in New York City and as you well put there is an end to the "icy rage". There is a lot of sports poetry - about baseball, track, football and yes, boxing. I volunteer 3 days a week at Poets House which is a 60,000 volume library of poetry. There is plenty of sports poetry there, Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/12/2015 3:56:00 AM Wow, thanks...I hadn't seen much on the web or here, so I wondered. Glad the winter is going there.

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/9/2015 5:19:00 AM Enjoyed this one..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/10/2015 4:33:00 PM Thanks so much, Sara. I do appreciate the feedback.

James Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 2:48:00 PM I love it when the Sun rescues so many situations, and the melting of the icicles and snows is normally a lovely sign that Spring has arrived. Lovely poem MLK, hugs, James :) Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/10/2015 4:35:00 PM It's finally arrived here; I have lovely tulips, narcissus and my pear trees are flowering beautifully...seems like we waited so long, but it's finally here...yeaaaaa. Glad that you stopped by to read and comment James; hope your Spring is wonderful.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 8:20:00 AM I love sunshine M.L. and this one takes me there.. :)! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/8/2015 12:41:00 PM I'm glad...I got a surprise this morning...I have paperwhites blooming and my pear trees are in bloom...finally! I thought spring would never arrive. I appreciate your comments, thanks again.

Kevin Leake Date: 4/8/2015 3:53:00 AM Really enjoyed this poem M.L, A lovely write and it's nice to feel the warmth once more!! God Bless Kevin Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/8/2015 12:41:00 PM Thanks so much for your comments, Kevin; I'm happy that you felt the warmth.