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Sun Shines On the Righteous

Sun shines on the righteous, after taking a long pause, having spent its warmth, on the wicked and infamous. The wind wiped away their dwelling as they prayed at the church. And abodes of those didn’t flutter, who spent the night gambling. The children of the honest do perish, starving for stale bread and water. The tables of those who cut throats are laden with cakes and plums they do not cherish. Bent by the pain, the pure one often ponders Should I detour my path some? But the righteous soul once again knees down in prayer- Waiting for the sun to do its wonders. Written: 04/14/2016 Ist place in Seren Robert's contest"Sun shines on the righteous"

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Date: 6/18/2016 2:37:00 PM
Sara, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 6/4/2016 5:11:00 PM
This is very nice Sara
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Date: 4/28/2016 12:04:00 AM
Nice win Sara, awesome sunshine theme... LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:12:00 AM
It has been wonderful reading all of your poems today Sara. Ending with this deep well written piece is a treat.
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Date: 4/19/2016 10:42:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Sara..
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/20/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 4/19/2016 6:48:00 PM
Hi Sara, Congrats on your impressive 1st place win with this creative and uplifting poem. Cheers, Brian
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/20/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Brian!
Date: 4/19/2016 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations Sara, on a great win...
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/20/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Charlie!
Date: 4/19/2016 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations Sara and thank you for entering my contest..... Seren
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/20/2016 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Seren for reading my poem and the top placement!
Date: 4/18/2016 5:52:00 PM
You are welcome Sara. Have a pleasant day. Linda
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/19/2016 2:00:00 PM
Hi Linda, did you get a chance to read 'Paint me if you should' poem I wrote for your photograph#1 contest. Please provide some feedback on that.
Date: 4/17/2016 8:19:00 AM
The imagery is incredible... Sara.... Enjoying this. LINDA
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/18/2016 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Linda!

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