Sun Set

Crimson red Orange Shocking pink Purple, violet Piercing through Golden rays Blazing Glorified vision Stopped in my tracks Time standing still No dream Biblical scene Almost like A miracle about to happen Retract It already has

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 7:07:00 AM

Yes, very visual. I like it very much and your ending is PERFECT for this kind of poem. See ya, Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2010 3:49:00 PM

Simone, I can see why this poem has garnered so many favorable comments. It is breathtakingly beautiful, just like the sunset you so masterfully describe. Bravo! Blessings, Connie I especially loved your ending.

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/4/2010 9:47:00 AM

great work on this simon, i love watching the sun rise and set it is beautiful and you really captured that with this poem it may as well have been a picture. =)

Sabu Joseph

Date: 1/21/2010 11:29:00 AM

fabulous vision...very romantic...keep it up Simone

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/17/2009 8:51:00 PM

Very nice, Simone! Beautiful images in this poem. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind and very encouraging comments on my poem today. I'll count you as number one with Carolyn, a tie. :) Thanks so much. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/11/2009 1:55:00 PM

Absolute perfect visual poetry... could see the colors u presented.. should be etched below a painting I think... too beautiful... wonderful write Simone... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/7/2009 1:41:00 PM

You are a beautiful visionary A savant of the word

Tobey Hill

Date: 12/1/2009 9:13:00 AM

well done..a lovely description of the setting sun....TAH

Farah Chamma

Date: 11/28/2009 2:45:00 AM

That's a fantastic write...it's colorful... and very well-written =) Always, Farah

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/24/2009 3:47:00 PM

Just tonight I was thinking how in the world I could describe some of the sunsets I have witnessed and still be original ! Honest. Well your poem on that very subject just blew me out of the water!! Awesome write, Simone! --Robert

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/21/2009 12:57:00 PM

Beautifully Described Phenonmenon Of One of God's Works ... The Arizona Desert, Has Sunsets, like the One You Described ... and you're right, one just has to stop and gape ... MoonBee

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 11/20/2009 2:31:00 AM

SIMONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!