Faye Gibson Poet Rhyme

Sun Scarred

Mirrored memories, glaring shards,
beam countless points of light, glass hard,
about my mind. I did not know,
you still could reach my soul. Love glow--
thought dead--moons, reflecting off my heart, sun scarred.


Copyright, September 1, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Nette Onclaud September 15, 2014 at 1:24 AM wrenching yet beautifully expressed, faye.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and hugggs!

Paul Callus September 14, 2014 at 3:33 AM I love your take on this contest theme, Faye; it has certainly worked with deserved results. Expressive final line. Congratulations! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 14, 2014 at 1:02 AM Very touching write, brilliant expressions Faye! Had to be a winner! Big congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2014 at 10:37 PM Brilliant write with a lovely message, Faye. congrats

Brenda Meier-Hans September 13, 2014 at 7:08 PM Congratulations on this beautiful poem Faye. I always love to read your poetry.

Jan Allison September 13, 2014 at 6:32 PM many congrats Faye:-) hugs Jan xxx

Jerry T Curtis September 3, 2014 at 5:08 PM Faye you are my number one poet Faye Gibson September 3, 2014 at 9:12 PM Jerry, thank you very much; I consider that a high compliment.

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2014 at 3:11 PM Nette is just going to swoon over this one! I wrote a really goofy one. You will see when I ever post it!!

Connie Marcum Wong September 1, 2014 at 10:38 PM A profound piece with a metaphoric message in your last lines. This is brilliantly written Faye. It should do really well in the contest.

Eileen Manassian September 1, 2014 at 2:47 PM Very interesting form and content matter here, Faye. The moon and sun are themes I love to write on. I'm interested in the use of imagery in this piece to reflect on memories and reality. Kindly check your mail! Thank you.